Sudden Death Challenge : lost,adrift,bitter, low and need.

@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
August 27, 2016 2:14pm CST
Really I'm adrift in a sea and lost How low can I get,how bitter my need You left, no words so I'm tempus tossed Love does not act like that, you heed? I grew up,not low no need Bitter not new love I'm freed No longer adrift on a wild sea I am now free,free to be me One original challenge poem, graphic by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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6 responses
@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
27 Aug 16
Love the last few lines, great job with these words!
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
28 Aug 16
thanks they were fun to do making sure they made sense and doing it quickly
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@CinnamonGrl (7083)
• Santa Fe, New Mexico
27 Aug 16
Very nice. To heck with whoever they are lol
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
28 Aug 16
he he all fiction not about me but just thinking of a friend whose fiance left her and how she would feel as she found a man that was just right for her and they are going to get married.
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@vandana7 (98526)
• India
27 Aug 16
I liked the poem, especially the last line..hugs.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
27 Aug 16
thanks I had fun trying to use the words given and it did come together loll
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@BelleStarr (61050)
• United States
28 Aug 16
You did a great job using the challenge words Well done.
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@jstory07 (133754)
• Roseburg, Oregon
28 Aug 16
You did really good with that challenge. I will have to try it.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
28 Aug 16
yes its such great fun and a challenge too
@Naryas (160)
• India
27 Aug 16
Nice. Kinda feeling the same
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
28 Aug 16
the poem really is not about me but a fictitious woman instead
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