Back in a younger day.

@TRBRocks420 (73642)
Banks, Oregon
August 28, 2016 4:15am CST
Back in a younger day. We used to love to play. And, we always had something to say. But we found a better way. When we learned how to pray. Now we're in a older day. Where we lay in the sun And, have lots of fun We're no longer on the run. And, a waitress named Maria calls us hun. Original poem by me.
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@toniganzon (48524)
• Philippines
29 Aug 16
another lovely poem.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
29 Aug 16
Thank you my friend
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@jaboUK (53411)
• United Kingdom
28 Aug 16
Sweet poem TR, well done.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Thank you my friend.
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@teamfreak16 (40502)
• Colorado Springs, Colorado
28 Aug 16
Another good one.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Thanks starting to enjoy writing them now.
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@Macarrosel (7576)
• Philippines
28 Aug 16
Wow! I didn't know you're a good poet my friend. Nice one.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Thanks I have wrote 4 recently now.
• Philippines
28 Aug 16
Nice way to tell your past with a poem. have a nice day.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Thanks and, have a good one.
@Juliaacv (28917)
• Canada
28 Aug 16
Gotta love the waitresses in the world who call us hon don't you? Its a great poem.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Yes and, thank you.
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@shivamani10 (11131)
• Hyderabad, India
28 Aug 16
Yes. I am recollecting my younger days when I was playing and teasing passersby of an old age.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Thank God we are wiser now.
@responsiveme (14461)
• India
28 Aug 16
like the poem.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Glad you like it thanks.
@millie02 (6908)
• United Kingdom
28 Aug 16
Good poem, made me smile.
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@TRBRocks420 (73642)
• Banks, Oregon
28 Aug 16
Thank you