My First Time Responding To Suddendeath Poetry Challenge

@marlina (66585)
Canada
September 10, 2016 11:21am CST
This is my first time ever that I am responding to @Jessicalynnt challenge. Here it goes: I kind of like to post on MyLot when I am hot I may write a short discussion Even if it is not too much of a mission I sure like to get comments On my short installments Discussions responding Is very rewarding
Welcome to this weekend’s Suddendeath poetry challenge, Mylot?! Anyways, rules are as follows, write a poem in any style using the five words that I give you....
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@amadeo (54003)
• United States
10 Sep 16
Good for you.I am not good at this.I am sure they will be plenty out there.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
@amadeo, I am not good at this stuff either as English being my second language.
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@Corbin5 (88956)
• United States
10 Sep 16
Well done! So glad you took the challenge. I have yet to do so, but so glad you did!
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
I decided to dip my toe this morning! When will you dip yours?
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@Corbin5 (88956)
• United States
10 Sep 16
@marlina When a challenge is an easy one, then dip my toe I will.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
11 Sep 16
@Corbin5 , I was a chicken for a long time, I was afraid to try this challenge, but this morning I bite the bullet. Waiting for you to do the same!
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• Midland, Michigan
10 Sep 16
For a first try, you did really well with this. The hard part with using more than one syllable words it's hard to find rhyming words that match more than the last portion. You were at least able to do that which is great. Before we know it, you'll be rattling them off in comments too.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Thank you very much, not easy for me to do this in English.
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• Midland, Michigan
10 Sep 16
@marlina Is French your native language, Marie? I don't remember knowing that if it's the case. I only ask because you told someone else recently the French word for Autumn. If English isn't your first language, then you did a superb job.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
@MarshaMusselman Yes, I am French-Canadian and French is my first language. I now reside in Ontario and speak English most of the time.
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@magallon (17390)
• Philippines
10 Sep 16
it was nice.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
@magallon, thanks
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@magallon (17390)
• Philippines
10 Sep 16
@marlina you' re welcome.
@JudyEv (107996)
• Bunbury, Australia
12 Sep 16
Well done! There'll be no stopping you now!
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
12 Sep 16
Thanks looking forward to do it again.
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@DianneN (66565)
• United States
10 Sep 16
Nice try!
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Thanks Dianne,
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@LadyDuck (131135)
• Switzerland
10 Sep 16
Congratulations, this is very good. You do a lot better than I do.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Thanks
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@amnabas (9951)
• Karachi, Pakistan
10 Sep 16
Nice try. Good to face the challenge buddy.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
I faced it this morning!
@Juliaacv (25926)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
That's great! I have no talent when it comes to putting words together sensibly to make a poem out of them. Unless you can count roses are red......
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Thanks, my first try at this challenge.
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@MALUSE (34516)
• Denmark
10 Sep 16
Now that you've dipped your toe in, will there be more to follow?
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
I must say that it was fun to do. I will try again for sure!
@jaboUK (52057)
• United Kingdom
10 Sep 16
Well done, pretty good.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Thanks Jabo @jaboUK , Maybe this will help me to write more of that stuff.
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@andriaperry (38702)
• United States
10 Sep 16
That is pretty good!
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Written under 10 minutes, my first try in English.
@jstory07 (61097)
• Roseburg, Oregon
10 Sep 16
You did really good with that challenge.
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@marlina (66585)
• Canada
10 Sep 16
Thanks, just trying my hand at it today.
@responsiveme (14290)
• India
11 Sep 16
Thats good and very true
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@Jessicalynnt (47895)
• Centralia, Missouri
10 Sep 16
and reading lovely versions with the chosen words is also rewarding! Loved it!!
@marlina (66585)
• Canada
11 Sep 16
Thanks for the compliment @Jsslynnt
@Drosophila (16774)
• Ireland
10 Sep 16
Good work
@just4him (99792)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
10 Sep 16
Well done for a first try.