Sound / myLot

Jamshedpur, India

September 27, 2016 1:08pm CST

It was a beautiful sunrise morning birds chirping was overwhelmed with cry of the baby boy, It was the bad sound of an excellent toy car as its wheels were removed by this boy, It was melodious sound when he sang for somebody special, It was a huge sound of fireworks when he got married, It was a lucid sound of harmonica in that tent of soldiers, It was a ......... sound of granades in the tents, he never got a chance to say good buy to his wife and kids, he was not prepared to do it because he is so young, It was the galantry sound of nation to its martyrs, Its the sound of their heart beating I am still with you, I am still with you!

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Judy Evans

@JudyEv (325584)

• Rockingham, Australia

20 Jul 17

This is sad. We owe a lot to our soldiers.

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paigea

@paigea (35669)

• Canada

11 Oct 16

A very touching poem

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Judy Story

@jstory07 (134388)

• Roseburg, Oregon

16 Nov 17

What a nice poem that you wrote. It is a good poem that you wrote.

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sofs

@sofssu (23662)

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28 Sep 16

Sad .. its the life of a soldier.

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KURASALA RAVI KUMAR

@crafty01 (480)

• Jamshedpur, India

28 Sep 16

Yes this poem is for martyrs of Uri attack by terrorists on India.

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sofs

@sofssu (23662)

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28 Sep 16

@crafty01 The life of a soldier is never easy but those he leaves behind have tougher battles to fight.

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KURASALA RAVI KUMAR

@crafty01 (480)

• Jamshedpur, India

28 Sep 16

@sofssu very true!

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Anna

@LadyDuck (457822)

• Switzerland

2 Oct 16

Oh my, what a beautiful but sad poem. We must keep our soldiers in our heart, because their sacrifice make us live in a free world.

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KURASALA RAVI KUMAR

@crafty01 (480)

• Jamshedpur, India

2 Oct 16

Very true!

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Faye

@FayeHazel (40248)

• United States

16 Nov 17

Quite poetic, thanks for sharing

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KURASALA RAVI KUMAR

@crafty01 (480)

• Jamshedpur, India

16 Nov 17

Welcome

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Shellyann36

@Shellyann36 (11385)

• United States

2 May 18

So very sad. It is so bad that the world thinks we should always be at war.

Anne Marie Guyer

@LeaPea2417 (36428)

• Toccoa, Georgia

3 Nov 16

That is a very sweet but sad poem.

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Jabo

@jaboUK (64361)

• United Kingdom

25 Nov 17

So sad, but a lovely post. I see you wrote this over a year ago, - you going to do something new sometime?

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Sharon

@simone10 (54189)

• Louisville, Kentucky

21 Oct 16

What a touching tribute to our soldiers all over the world.

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The Horse

@TheHorse (205554)

• Walnut Creek, California

3 Dec 17

Very sad.

DianneN

@DianneN (246525)

• United States

22 Nov 17

Wow! That is a sad and very touching poem and so true.

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KURASALA RAVI KUMAR

@crafty01 (480)

• Jamshedpur, India

22 Nov 17

Thank you

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Rubeena Bashir Kunju

@rubyriaz007 (4188)

• India

26 Nov 17

It is a very beautiful poem.It is because of the soldiers we all sleep peacefully. They are always there to protect us and they sacrifice their lives for us. They really deserve a big salute.

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Rhonda S.

@misunderstood_zombie (8142)

• United States

22 Nov 17

Very sad poem. I feel sorry for the soldiers and their family left behind.

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KURASALA RAVI KUMAR

@crafty01 (480)

• Jamshedpur, India

22 Nov 17

That is actual pic of smoke rising from Indian Army Camp, incident happened at place Uri on 18 Sept 2016, in the name of religion some can think of spilling blood only.

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