My uncompleted novel,A story of a Soldier!!

Ottawa, Ontario
September 29, 2016 8:19pm CST
Rajeev she shouted where are you? I am here tina! What are you doing?ah writing the diary of mystery? No tina its just usual! Really rajeev plz show me[she approachs to the diary......] No tina its pesonal ans tells her to bring a cup of tea[to change the topic] She went angrily and bringed a cup of tea and kept it on the table with a very loud sound!! Sudeenly phone ranged,she went to pickup,heloo!! Hy came as a reply,mam can i speak to mayor rajesh,its from the army base? Hold for a sec,replied tina" Rajeev its from the army base"tina said. I thrusly went there and said yes. ................................ ................................ After few conversation i kept the phone down Tina asked,"what happen? Rajeev replied,"i have to move tonight to the army camp as it was suspected that there will be attack on border" Again you are going you came yesterday only? Yes sweety,i have to go but i promise i will come soon,rajeev replied" And he started to pack and in half an hour army jeep came to take him. Rajeev said to tina,"sweety it is suspected that there will be very major attack this time" I will pray your success and quick arrival to me,"Tina replied Ah thank you and kissed her forehead,bye Tina"said Rajeev You needn't say bye as you are never leaving,you are in my heart" Then he sat down in jeep and the started to move on,i saw him shaking his hand until i was able to See him then his image was hidden in the long journey........... It was the last time i saw him........................................................... Yeah he was right it was a very major fight in the history of indo-pak war,that is indo pak war of 1961.. He never came back.. It was from the two days from his arrival,a news came that the amry fighting in the .......... fought with great courage And succeded too but by taking blood of many...........alongwith his some belongings,seeing this i understood that he was no more, I was unable to speak wanted to cry but i was not able to as it was hard to believe that his face was moving in my mind Then they kept the body of him wrapped in the national flag in the floor ,seeing this i burst out with tears.. ............. ............. After his funeral ceremony,i went home I sat on the chair with no sense about what is Happenning in my life and suddenly i noticed a letter hanging in Rajeev bag I went towards it an opened it........ Dear Tina, I know that you will be very sad reading this letter as i no more with you,i am sorry i was not able to fulfill my promise As the circumstances bounded me.today it started firing from early and the enemies are out of control and i cant say that i will survive or not So i left a letter for you.you remember one day you asked me that hat i was writing in the diary,so now you can read it,it is in the bag And always remember that i love you,and with this i want to finish the conversation as i have to go... Bye With love from Rajeev To be continued......... I will complete the novel when i will get time because the next part will be very amazing as Tina is going to read Rajeev diary of mystery.. Thank you.. Please like,comment and follow if you like my writing to encourage me to write the next part....
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@teenspirit (1601)
• Israel
30 Sep 16
well done! keep writing you are great
• Mumbai, India
30 Sep 16
wow! that's really awesome you have wondefull ideas
@princemaxp (2054)
• Bhubaneshwar, India
30 Sep 16
this comes under short stories.....not novel