Suddendeath poetry Challenge: Life

Centralia, Missouri
October 8, 2016 9:38pm CST
Welcome to this weekend’s Suddendeath poetry challenge, Life! Anyways, rules are as follows, write a poem in any style using the five words that I give you. Write it in one sitting or in under an hour (only to quash your inner editor, rules are loose there). Add it here, OR link in a comment so we can enjoy each other’s' poems. The words can be in any plurality or tense. Today’s words are:life, end, sad, blue, lost Here, I gave you the words, sorry... I dont have an entry. I am not doing to well....
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@LadyDuck (182861)
• Switzerland
9 Oct 16
I see a sad mood in those words, I will do my best. Life is not always our friend What we took for granted, one day ends. Sad memories then follow, we feel blue and the world seems to halt. We feel lost, but we know that we must go on.
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
oh, that feels like it was written FOR me. Thanks hun, I needed those words. Lovely use of MY words
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@LadyDuck (182861)
• Switzerland
12 Oct 16
@Jessicalynnt You were in my thought while I was writing this.
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• Centralia, Missouri
15 Oct 16
@LadyDuck I thought that might be the case, thanks hun
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• Eugene, Oregon
9 Oct 16
Life can come to a sudden end, no warning, leaving survivors lost. Though skies above are still blue, their world is an indigo hue.
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
that is very very lovely
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• United States
9 Oct 16
@Jessicalynnt Praying for you! I will do it for the first time as I am sensing a call to write poetry again.
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
thanks, can deff use all the prayer I can get. this is....so hard.
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@jstory07 (71338)
• Roseburg, Oregon
9 Oct 16
I might try and do one.
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
I love seeing what everyone comes up with
@Daljinder (22196)
• India
10 Oct 16
Life is at an end Loss everywhere Feeling blue Can't find the glue To mend and repair Tired of being sad Wish I could be bad But heart is a turd It never learns Hope flies Always away from my eyes Fallen tears Misery near like my only ally Give me a hug Wrap your arms tight Hold me close The sun is too bright
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
I really liked that, and I loved the lines about the heart, it really can be.
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@Daljinder (22196)
• India
12 Oct 16
@Jessicalynnt Thank you! Hope you are doing well
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• Centralia, Missouri
15 Oct 16
@Daljinder nights are aweful, days have their ups and downs
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@just4him (128780)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
9 Oct 16
Understandable.
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
I thought I could come back and edit it in, no such luck, yet1
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@JolietJake (51104)
• United States
9 Oct 16
((((((hugz))))))
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• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
thanks JJ
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@GardenGerty (104246)
• United States
16 Oct 16
Out of the blue, I find myself lost. You chose for us both, And we both pay the cost. We once had a life From beginning to end. It is amazingly sad, We are no longer friends.
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• Centralia, Missouri
16 Oct 16
another one that is for me, and so apt. that is quite lovely, thank you