Sudden Death Poetry Challenge: Life

@just4him (95756)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
October 10, 2016 11:25am CST
In answer to @Jessicalynnt challenge about life. I came up with this little limerick. Yes, I finally wrote a limerick. life, end, sad, blue, lost Life takes a turn we don't expect Love lost, so tragic, such disrespect Color me blue No longer true The end of all life's magic My prayers are with you in all the struggles you are facing right now. Thanks for reading.
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@allen0187 (27914)
• Philippines
10 Oct 16
Thanks for sharing this. How you've captured one's life in so few words is truly amazing.
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@just4him (95756)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
14 Oct 16
Thank you. I can't write poetry unless God's hand is in it. It really isn't my forte.
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@allen0187 (27914)
• Philippines
15 Oct 16
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@Jessicalynnt (47938)
• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
oh, I dont know if that was written FOR me or not, but it felt like it was. and I loved it.
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@just4him (95756)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
14 Oct 16
Yes it was. You are in my prayers.
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• Centralia, Missouri
15 Oct 16
@just4him well thank you, I needed it then, still do really
@Drosophila (16804)
• Ireland
12 Oct 16
Such a beautiful poem
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@just4him (95756)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
14 Oct 16
Thank you.
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@Daljinder (19944)
• India
12 Oct 16
That's a good one and the way you wrote it!
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@just4him (95756)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
14 Oct 16
Thank you very much
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@jstory07 (59765)
• Roseburg, Oregon
11 Oct 16
I like the way that you wrote on this challenge.
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@just4him (95756)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
14 Oct 16
Thank you very much.