Sudden Death Poetry Challenge: Life
@just4him (305350)
Green Bay, Wisconsin
October 10, 2016 11:25am CST
In answer to @Jessicalynnt challenge about life. I came up with this little limerick. Yes, I finally wrote a limerick.
life, end, sad, blue, lost
Life takes a turn we don't expect
Love lost, so tragic, such disrespect
Color me blue
No longer true
The end of all life's magic
My prayers are with you in all the struggles you are facing right now.
Thanks for reading.
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@allen0187 (58438)
• Philippines
10 Oct 16
Thanks for sharing this.
How you've captured one's life in so few words is truly amazing.
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
12 Oct 16
oh, I dont know if that was written FOR me or not, but it felt like it was. and I loved it.
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
15 Oct 16
@just4him well thank you, I needed it then, still do really
@Daljinder (23228)
• Bangalore, India
12 Oct 16
That's a good one and the way you wrote it!
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