Shampoo Jingles and Old Country Songs (Poem)
@JamesHxstatic (29234)
Eugene, Oregon
October 18, 2016 11:27am CST
Weeding roses, mind in deep neutral,
Luster Creme Shampoo floated by.
More than the name, the whole jingle,
Dream Girl, Dream Girl, Beautiful
Luster Creme Girl, I sang it softly,
wondering where that came from,
dug some chickweed out, then
from a west Texas juke box came
Hank Snow, I Don't Hurt Anymore.
No use to deny, I wanted to cry,
the day you said we were through,
pretty much the whole verse.
I jabbed at the dirt, reached
for a dandelion behind the rose bush.
Caught a thorn in my arm, no more
songs, no more jingles, a little blood,
some soft cursing, Miller Time.
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@crazyhorseladycx (39515)
• United States
18 Oct 16
i see ya found some 'f yer poetry, mr. james :) thanks fer sharin' 't with 's 'n purty please 've a miller fer me! yepperz, been 'one 'f those days'...
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@celticeagle (158680)
• Boise, Idaho
18 Oct 16
Jingles sure were a act of genius weren't they?
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@Tampa_girl7 (48890)
• United States
20 Oct 16
Some jingles stick in our head forever.
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@teamfreak16 (43421)
• Denver, Colorado
19 Oct 16
I like that. I can't write poetry. I've tried.
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@JamesHxstatic (29234)
• Eugene, Oregon
19 Oct 16
Thanks, Scott. I was in a local group and even won some contests with the Oregon Poetry Association.
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@JamesHxstatic (29234)
• Eugene, Oregon
18 Oct 16
Thanks, it is not a very new one.
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@sallypup (57727)
• Centralia, Washington
18 Oct 16
You're on a roll. (Don't literally do that, please. There might be poison ivy near.)
@JamesHxstatic (29234)
• Eugene, Oregon
18 Oct 16
Thanks, it is one I wrote a while back.
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