Sudden Death Challenge no

@Hatley (164736)
Garden Grove, California
October 25, 2016 4:30pm CST
Words are no,never. negative,not hardly My table mate refuses to take no for an answer When I say no.not.she reacts like a panther I say it again not hardly, negative. no I do not want that and I must go. So she waits for the next meal Like a cog i n a wheel Here take this and I say, no Not hardly negative I must go. So I get to m y room boo m look in my tote bag Theres all I said no to gag. Food thats old. even mold So the lady does not take no for an answer I will now begin to react llike an angry panther I dump the unwanted food she says no I yell" yes take it, all of it,has to go. So Im now left in peace at meals Saying no just really heals No,negative, not hardly and never I used them all as a clever lever. One original poem and graphic by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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@RasmaSandra (16629)
• Riga, Latvia
25 Oct 16
Just picked up your other challenge. You're putting my brain on short-circuit but here goes I am not hardly, ever tardy. Never negative am I, positive all the way. So I never, no, never say never, there is always a way, to get through it all and manage to stand tall
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Oct 16
love it you did that really well good for you
@RasmaSandra (16629)
• Riga, Latvia
27 Oct 16
@Hatley Thanks this one just sort of came easy
@bunnybon7 (35533)
• Holiday, Florida
26 Oct 16
sounds like tough to deal with person there
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Oct 16
yes she refuses to understand i do not want something she keeps stuff then it gets outdated so she gives it to us her tablemates she gave me an organ anshen I went to eat it myfingers went through it as it was rottern. ugh she kept doing tat til AI told her no
@Happy2BeMe (74406)
• Canada
25 Oct 16
Another great poem.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Oct 16
thankds it was easy to write as its all too true.
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@just4him (110243)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
25 Oct 16
Great poem. I'm glad she got the hint.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Oct 16
thanks Im am too as Im sick of her foisting off c rap on em thjats either spoiled or out date or I plain dislke like boiled peanuts ugh they are nasty ick yick
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• Rochester, New York
25 Oct 16
Great poem there!
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Oct 16
thanks I had a lot of fun writing it as its all too truew lol
@marlina (71303)
• Canada
25 Oct 16
It took her a long time to take the hint.
@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
26 Oct 16
yes it did I had to throw the rottern orange in her5 lap
@Jessicalynnt (47790)
• Centralia, Missouri
27 Oct 16
very nice use of the words!