"DYING LOVE"-pls. comment if you like this poem.I made this :)

Philippines
November 26, 2006 12:37am CST
I tried my best to reach out I tried to be patient.. Yet I hear nothing.. Nothing but silence.. No matter how you deny Keep on denying Your love for me died And you keep me hanging.. When will you find the courage To tell me how you feel.. Just tell me the truth I'll listen, you hear? Stop hurting me I'm not that strong.. Stop lying to me It' so wrong.. I'll go, I'll go.. Take care I love you.. Coz I can't take it, Our love is dying..
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3 responses
• Singapore
26 Nov 06
It's nice...did you write this in reflection of something that really happened? If so, sorry to hear that, but you know what...there's always something else better out there....
• Philippines
26 Nov 06
Yes, I wrote the poem..And yes it is about my experiences in life..thanx
@disvachic (10121)
• United States
26 Nov 06
I like it.Its so sad.keep writing those poems.Do you write alot?
• Philippines
28 Nov 06
yes i have lotsa poems.It's in a notebook.thnx 4 the comment
• Philippines
28 Nov 06
yes i have lotsa poems.It's in a notebook.thnx 4 the comment
@blueman (16513)
• India
26 Nov 06
nice poem, very romantic.
• Philippines
28 Nov 06
thanx 4 the comment;)