Haiku Thursday 29th December 2016

photo taken by me - time-clock
Preston, England
December 29, 2016 7:16am CST
1/. Peckish memory Nibbles away ideas Saving none for me 2/. Ninja dream nightmare Too quiet to frighten me Or cause REM 3/. Stupid O’clock time That sleep forsook to labour Antisocial hours 4/. This year lies bleeding Father Time promises help January First 5/. Datastick of gods Corrupted files deleted I’m on one of them Arthur Chappell
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@Jessicalynnt (47895)
• Centralia, Missouri
29 Dec 16
I loved these! I had issues sleeping myself, so #3 appealed to me.
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• Preston, England
29 Dec 16
@Jessicalynnt I love how different readers pick different ones as the one of most meaning to them here
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• Centralia, Missouri
29 Dec 16
@arthurchappell I was hoping if I kept doing that others would start! hehehe
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• Preston, England
30 Dec 16
@Jessicalynnt it worked - well done
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@Kandae11 (40336)
29 Dec 16
The Ninja dream nightmares sounds like one I can relate to - but I love ninja movies. Good poetry.
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@responsiveme (16835)
• India
29 Dec 16
The year ends again Budding promises unfolding in future My wish for you Have a great year ahead.
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@BelleStarr (39590)
• United States
29 Dec 16
Number 5 is rather ominous, are you really a corrupted file, lol I think not!! Well done and Happy New Year.
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29 Dec 16
I liked the second one! But all of them are good!
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@LaJenna (147)
• United States
29 Dec 16
Very good Haiku poem I enjoy writing haiku poems.