Flying High into The Sky

@Hatley (151913)
Garden Grove, California
January 23, 2017 3:48pm CST
Flying high into the sky Birds fly why can;t I? 'You have no wings my dear child.' 'Its been so long since I did a haiku not sure if I did it right One original post and graphic by P Haley copyrighted 2017
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@Corbin5 (69677)
• United States
23 Jan
It is a lovely haiku. I really enjoyed your haiku.
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@Hatley (151913)
• Garden Grove, California
24 Jan
Im glad you liked it as had fn writing it
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@Marty1 (21979)
• Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
23 Jan
@hatley Haiku is my favorite form of poetry and it sounds great I am impressed you have not done one in some time and you come up with one as great as this!
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@Hatley (151913)
• Garden Grove, California
24 Jan
ethanks I did it back wards sjhould be five seven five
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@Marty1 (21979)
• Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
24 Jan
@Hatley Thank you for telling me the correct form I was so thrilled with you, and it has been so long since I wrote one myself I forgot! I still say it was a good poem it just isn't a haiku I guess, but it could be free form, or maybe another form of poetry has your syllables in it! Keep writing great poetry and great discussions!
@DWDavis (11218)
• Pikeville, North Carolina
23 Jan
I love the poem.
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@Hatley (151913)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Jan
thanks i did it 757 it shpuld be the other way around
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@jstory07 (57760)
• Roseburg, Oregon
23 Jan
You did good with this post.
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@Hatley (151913)
• Garden Grove, California
24 Jan
thanks I did have fun
@epiffanie (8225)
• Australia
24 Jan
It makes sense therefore you did it right ..