Cawing Morning Poem

Italy
February 10, 2017 6:32am CST
Good morning. I wrote this short poem last night, to be honest. However, it was about something I experienced last morning. And I can't wait for some sleep. I'm a vampire, they said. The sun climbs the hill, the bells touch, sparrows chirp weakly among sweet croaks. The crows, the crows, my fabolous siblings! I bet, I'm sure, for coffee they're begging! How would you explain all that crying at seven o'clock in the morning? It's raining, so the meeting I had to attend today might be postponed. Good, maybe I can go to sleep earlier. Update: The meeting WAS postponed. Me goes to sleep! Laters.
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@JolietJake (28145)
• Olney, Illinois
10 Feb
*lifts covers and climbs in bed* What? You looked cold, thought I'd help you stay warm...
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• Italy
10 Feb
I'm cold because I'm a bloodsucking vampire.
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@JolietJake (28145)
• Olney, Illinois
10 Feb
@sabtraversa I'm gonna be nice and just leave that comment alone
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@Kandae11 (11957)
10 Feb
Not bad at all.
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• Italy
10 Feb
Thanks.
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• Philippines
10 Feb
Lol! God bless you a great sleep and beautiful dream. I bet you will still have a long day after tonight.
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• Italy
10 Feb
Thank you. Yes, I'm going to have a long night, actually.
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@HAPPSINGH (68791)
• Jalandhar, India
10 Feb
I won't say Good, i won't say bad, i will only say I love you for that lol. Well done Sabrina
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• Italy
10 Feb
Hehe, thank you.
@HAPPSINGH (68791)
• Jalandhar, India
11 Feb
@sabtraversa hows you doing today, Sabrina
• Italy
11 Feb
@HAPPSINGH I'm feeling tired.
• Bournemouth, England
11 Feb
I only recently learned how to tell the sounds of two similar birds apart. Apparently crows 'caw' but rooks 'rock'.
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• Italy
11 Feb
Wow, I didn't know. English as foreign language wouldn't have helped me either, I thought rooks were crows. I mean, never heard that word before. Here all black birds of that family are usually "corvi". I don't think we have rooks here anyway, at least not in the cities.
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• Bournemouth, England
12 Feb
@sabtraversa And then are the also similar-looking ravens...
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@Orson_Kart (3539)
• United Kingdom
11 Feb
In my literary world you've committed a crime. Because my dear Sabrina your poem doesn't rhyme. Due to that fact you'd have to suppose. I'd be more than happy to call it prose.
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• Italy
11 Feb
I see you aren't into modern poetry. Although the most modern poetry is about making shapes with words, uh.
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• United Kingdom
12 Feb
@sabtraversa If by modern poetry you mean it doesn't rhyme, then yes, I am not into it. However, I can see what you were trying to create and it was very good.
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@alberello75 (6217)
• Genova, Italy
11 Feb
Sorry for this question: But you, at what time, you usually fall asleep? You have to know that every night I have to make use of sleeping pills. On these evenings, however, I want to follow all the episodes of "Festival di Sanremo 2017". Already, I am very saddened for the elimination of "Gigi D'Alessio"
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• Italy
11 Feb
I usually fall asleep at 6, 8 or 10 in the morning. I'm not following the Festival, but I might go watch some videos on Youtube if I missed out. So, did you stop taking sleep pills for watching the Festival?
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• Genova, Italy
11 Feb
@sabtraversa Yes, tonight's final of the "champions". I cheer for "Fiorella Mannoia" or "Ermal Meta"
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@LeaPea2417 (9202)
• Toccoa, Georgia
10 Feb
That is nicely written.
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• Italy
10 Feb
Thank you.
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• Toccoa, Georgia
10 Feb
@sabtraversa Your welcome :)
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@LadyDuck (86607)
• Switzerland
10 Feb
I did not know you were a vampire, so theoretically you should only go around during the night. Be careful with the sun.
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• Italy
10 Feb
I will. I can always apply some sun protection cream.
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@LadyDuck (86607)
• Switzerland
10 Feb
@sabtraversa Use the one with the biggest protection and wear black sunglasses.
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@paigea (17997)
• Canada
14 Feb
Those early morning birds must be screaming for coffee!
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• Italy
14 Feb
Exactly, I don't get it otherwise.
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@jstory07 (48903)
• Roseburg, Oregon
13 Feb
Will that is good at least you can get some sleep.
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• Italy
13 Feb
True, no bad feelings, all good.
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@TRBRocks420 (45748)
• Banks, Oregon
10 Feb
Well done on the poem and, thanks for sharing.
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• Italy
11 Feb
Thank you.
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• Finland
10 Feb
Nice little poem
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• Italy
10 Feb
Thank you.