Gift Hour So To Devour

@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
April 21, 2017 10:18pm CST
Gift hour so to devour' Say goodnight or hour' Some good news to ponder' Or let my thpughts wander. One must make herself happy Not friends nor mom nor pappy You must decde to be content' :Ler your bad feelibgs ferment Throw them out amd don;t lament You were not born in a tent So be hjappy be content' See all that you have and smile All efforts are so worthwhile I have been down, so deep and frown 'But we rose above it all and did not drown We found help; and found ways to be happy Never paid to listen to old grumpy pappy Now to close and not Take raps Don't let losers bring you dowm Just turn downs to a silver grown Good night all tell mates you love Do it now tomorrows not a guarantee So we say good nights till good morrows We share our joys and share our sorrow We are so proud our new cars no model tee One original poem and graphic by P Hatley copyrighted 2017
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@Courtlynn (67002)
• United States
22 Apr 17
Way better than i could do. Have a good night, and sayurday too
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
22 Apr 17
good nightg have a wo nderful nigyt I will too
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@Happy2BeMe (99420)
• Canada
22 Apr 17
Very nicely written. Good night
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
22 Apr 17
thanks so m uch have a l;ovelynight too
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
22 Apr 17
@Happy2BeMe I did til thee am then could not get back to sleep
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@Happy2BeMe (99420)
• Canada
22 Apr 17
@Hatley thanks hope you slept well
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@jstory07 (133787)
• Roseburg, Oregon
22 Apr 17
I hope you have a good night.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
22 Apr 17
hope you do too
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• Banks, Oregon
22 Apr 17
Another great poem I enjoy reading these and always look for a new one
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
22 Apr 17
thank glad you liked it as I also had writing it too
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• Banks, Oregon
22 Apr 17
@Hatley I used to love writing poems but I was never that good
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@responsiveme (22932)
• India
22 Apr 17
Have a good night.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
22 Apr 17
I wishI had but a nap this m orning did help a lot