Do you love writing poetries?
By shali3000
@shali3000 (742)
Italy
November 26, 2006 3:40pm CST
If so,can you dedicate me your poetry?:)
It's mine for you:
"Goodnight"
***Goodnight to who sighs and to who cries for the road
to who it hopes and to who it pursues a dream
to who it is reietto and to who it has a heart in chest
to who it is alone and to who it has belief in a miracle
to who it is besieged and to who it is repudiated
to who it loves and to who a love desires
to the vagrants to the poor and to the lovers
to the small to the subdued and to the weak
to who it is not tormented and good weather goes to sleep***
Sorry if the translate in English isn't very good but I wrote it in Italian language:)
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9 responses
@september_1st (3209)
• Romania
26 Nov 06
Yes i do love poetry and sometimes, when i feel inspired enough i lay dawn on paper a few words. I have a post where i shared one of my poems. You can read it here and let me know what you think of it: http://www.mylot.com/w/discussions/265748.aspx
I have only two poems that i wrote in english, others are in my native language - romanian - and i couldn't translate them because they would lost their beauty and meaning.
@shali3000 (742)
• Italy
26 Nov 06
I read your poetry and I like it :) I hope you liked mine :)
Thanx for your answer
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@ganandoplata (814)
• Chile
26 Nov 06
No, I don´t write poerty too much, as I am not good at it... I hope I could be good at it!
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@sweetie88 (4556)
• Pakistan
14 Jan 07
Very good translation!!!! Urs poem is really nice and i too read poetry and seldom write. I am from Pakistan and our national language is Urdu. Let me dedicate u an english verse but its n't mine.
Rivers can dry, stars can fly
U can forget me but never I
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
7 Dec 06
No but I like to read them
heres one I like
Christmas is a holiday for friends,
However they may be, or not, related.
Remember that the three wise kings were strangers
In search of one remote, uncanny dream.
So may we all be far more than we seem,
Together bound for dark and haunting changes,
More lovely for the loves we have created
Along the lonely paths from means to ends,
Stumbling towards that star of Bethlehem.
