Words Tumble In My Head
@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
May 22, 2017 10:24pm CST
I read a poem in posts with no answers
I felt sad for her as it was thoughtful
She needed to condense a bit
To read it then edit and shorten
Nobody answered so sad why?
Why not encourage people here
If its not so bad give her a chance
No we cannot respond t o every one
I hear the excuses before even written
But we all can adopt one forlorn post
It will not kill us to help one mylotter
We all were new here once
I have a bit less than one hour
to smile and feel sad for some
Who wants to post get no response?
That hurts and we all can help a bit.
So Goodnight try to help one person
see you all later tomorrow Tuesday
Tell y our mates you love them do it now
Do not wait as we never know about tomorrow
One original poem and graphic by P Hatley
copyrighted 2017
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8 responses
@andriaperry (116860)
• Anniston, Alabama
23 May 17
I am at fault for not looking for the new people and commenting.
Life is short and we should be kind to people.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 May 17
yes it just takes a moment or so and will help someones self esteem
@celticeagle (159030)
• Boise, Idaho
23 May 17
Yes, just helping one person would be great. You never do know about tomorrow.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
24 May 17
@celticeagle yes he really did miss him after alolthese years
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@celticeagle (159030)
• Boise, Idaho
23 May 17
@Hatley .......That is a good philosophy on life.
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@ElusiveButterfly (45940)
• United States
23 May 17
Well written Patsie. We are all here to support one another. Sometimes a good post gets lost amongst the flood of others.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 May 17
yes thats it and she seemed pretty good at writing just needed to edit a bit was all
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 May 17
I had pretty good and also good nap now am goiog to get busy lol
@Freelanzer (10745)
• Canada
23 May 17
Well said. I try to get to posts without comments first.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 May 17
tahnks glad you do and I decided to do that too
@responsiveme (22926)
• India
23 May 17
Yes, the no responses should be respo need to.But sometimes it's hard to do that
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 May 17
I know at of mylotters do not have the luxury of tme unlimited as I do as Im retired but believe me I earnedd tjois rfght to as I worked until I was 80
years old so I earned it
