The bird that has neither wings nor eyes

@luispas (1780)
Venezuela
May 30, 2017 6:31pm CST
In a cage there's a Bird, the most beautiful one, with gold and long feathers, but something is different in it , it has no wings and eyes and its still inside the cage waiting for someone to help it, for the day when it finally can get out and be free. The bird has spent a lot of time trying to fly, and is still dreaming that one day it will have the chance to be normal like any other it knew, even with his issues he'll make history by being know as the one that always dreams and never lose hope. Everyone will know him.
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• Lakewood, Colorado
31 May
Did you make this up Luis? It is simply fantastic! You have coined me in a few lines..I feel like that bird.
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• Lakewood, Colorado
31 May
@Lupita234 I was famous at my work Jesus.
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@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
31 May
@TiarasOceanView Yes I did this by myself and I also made a drawing of the bird, I'll have to show you how it looks. I'm happy that you feel my words :D makes me happy
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• Lakewood, Colorado
31 May
@luispas Oh I really do Luis, but you know I am similar in thoughts to you. Oh you could upload here maybe no? I would love to see that one. You are very creative. You can put your copyright on these and one day who knows?
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@marguicha (76297)
• Chile
31 May
How beautiful!
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@marguicha (76297)
• Chile
31 May
@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
31 May
@marguicha Thank you so much :')
@Imperfet (131)
31 May
If you wrote it yourself hats off Just some grammatical errors , nice content
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@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
31 May
@Imperfet yes I did by myself. Oh :( can you help me to fix the errors?
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@Imperfet (131)
31 May
@luispas yes of course I will Okay so instead of writing "but something happen to him, he lost his wings and eyes" you should write "but something is differnet in it , it has no wings and eyes and its still inside the cage waiting for someone to help it, for the day when it finally can get out and be free . The bird has spent a lot of time trying to fly, and is still dreaming that one day it will have the chance to be normal like any other it knew ..." the rest is correct. You have the power to change anyone's thinking keep it up : )
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@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
31 May
@Imperfet Oh now I get it, because he's an animal, but I don't know, I want him to be more than that. Thank you so much, the next time I'll be more careful with this :D I appreciate you time
@KrauseHome (32391)
• United States
19 Jun
Just think this goes to show, no matter who we are, or what we are going thru at the moment, it is never too late to dream about different things on what we could be when things are different.
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@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
19 Jun
You're so right. All we need it's time, with the time everything changes. And we can't stop dreaming.
@Deepizzaguy (6496)
• Lake Charles, Louisiana
31 May
Thank you for sharing this story of the bird that has no eyes or wings.
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@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
31 May
Your welcome :) I think I'm gonna do stories like this again
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@magnumopus (1690)
• Singapore
31 May
I wonder why the bird lose its wings and eyes?
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@luispas (1780)
• Venezuela
31 May
That's a very great question, do you want to know more about the little bird?
31 May
Awesome write up!
@vandana3 (223)
31 May
Is losing sight & wings symbolic to helplessness?and still having bright hope with these handicaps@luispas