There is a diamond in my rose

@Wowtalk (592)
Jamaica
June 11, 2017 4:18pm CST
There is a diamond in my rose I watered it and it started to grow It shoots towards the sky Showing off its glittering light Turning heads of strangers passing by Who knew there could be a diamond in a rose? This surprises me too Because this was so rare It has caused so many to stare A diamond! A diamond! A diamond in a rose! It was simply amazing This must have been what many spoke about True beauty but not beauty itself Possesses amazing abilities to go with it as well Don’t be fooled this diamond was in the soil Before it was shaped to perfection to make it worthwhile It was then placed upon my rose Where it added its luster to make my rose exposed. K. Jones
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• United States
11 Jun 17
Now this is beautiful writing!! I could see the rose and the diamond within as I was reading. You write great stuff!!
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@Wowtalk (592)
• Jamaica
11 Jun 17
Thanks much!!
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• United States
11 Jun 17
@Wowtalk Welcome.
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Nov 17
thats brilli ant wow
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@Wowtalk (592)
• Jamaica
1 Dec 17
Thank you!
@1hopefulman (45123)
• Canada
15 Jun 17
Wow, that's a nice poem!
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@Wowtalk (592)
• Jamaica
16 Jun 17
Thanks much!! Felix
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