July 23 "What Is On My Mind?
@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
July 23, 2017 11:46am CST
I feel daunted at timew by that question
Whaif whats on my kind is not intersting?
What if it is completley irrevelmt to mylotters?
ILsthis writers block wodering about evry word?
nNo its just me plodding along on a breahtless
JHOt Sunday morniing awake after a nap.
IL sometimes wonder how one fianllly wites
As itnever looks as perfect as you would likle
"But somelittle devil l with a pitch forkprods a writer
to putdown words an d worry about tjem all
One um so called ady said it makes no sense
'I read and rerad amd it meant what i wanted it to mean
So perjaps we tinge eourr poems in mstery'
Perhaps we dip our words to poaint a strory
but does i t lose its tinge of glory?
Soes it tell my story
One original poem
and graphic by P Hatley
copyrighted 2017
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@Courtlynn (66921)
• United States
23 Jul 17
I'm not the one who said it, but to be honest- alot of your post are read to hard sometimes because of all the misspelled words and stuff. Although i get most of it.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Jul 17
IL am trying to get more editing d oneI do not misspell I make typos I am working still ;wi thoit glasses sorry you sound so darned self righteous waiti tl you cannot see well
@Courtlynn (66921)
• United States
23 Jul 17
@Hatley some are also misspelled not just typos. But its okay long as you edit.
@BarBaraPrz (45437)
• St. Catharines, Ontario
23 Jul 17
My cousin would ask me that question when we were younger, and I'd answer "Nothing."
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@Hate2Iron (15730)
• Canada
23 Jul 17
I love stopping by to see what you have come up with... always giving me something to think about!!
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Jul 17
thas so truye and the s ooner realzed that the better lol
@FayeHazel (40248)
• United States
23 Jul 17
It's a great topic actually. I have a little notepad full of ideas for articles - however sometimes when I get to writing them, they simply don't come out easily
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
23 Jul 17
yes U have beeb tgere tii abd biw un avubg triybke wtg nt eyes
