Poetry Challenge: Tombe

United States
August 12, 2017 9:03am CST
Provoked into action by Jekca! Rules are as follows, write a poem in any style using the five words that [she] give[s] you. Write it in one sitting or in under an hour (only to quash your inner editor, rules are loose there). Add it here, OR link in a comment so we can enjoy each other's poems. The words can be in any plurality or tense. Today’s words are: need, courage, passion, strength, dance PASSION: TOMBE Once I knew the dance And with the grace of Pavlova, The strength of Baryshnikov, And courage of the four-year old Clinging to the barre, I leapt through time and space. I froze life, hovering mid-air. I balanced on tip-toe, poised And controlled, Just waiting to be captured. Long ago, the grace fell. The strength grew weak. The courage faltered. Incomplete the days have been Since a sashay or pirouette saved From long and bitter nights. I need to find that pulse again— That life’s blood rhythm of the soul. To arabesque and entrechat From one heart’s beat to the next Grand jete.
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@sishy7 (27169)
• Australia
12 Aug 17
Beautiful and very passionate... I can feel the passion, even if the word is not in it... And welcome to myLot!
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• United States
12 Aug 17
Ohhh I was going to name it Passion at first. Then switched to Tombre. Well, I'm a rebel, anyway, so...yeah! Thanks for stopping in and commenting!
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@sishy7 (27169)
• Australia
12 Aug 17
@Pennicash No worries... I really do enjoy your poem. I took ballet growing up until well into my late teen, so the words and the whole poem took me back down memory lanes some...
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• Philippines
14 Aug 17
@sishy7 i didn't know you were a ballet dancer. why did you stop?
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@RasmaSandra (73368)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
12 Aug 17
Really nice. Enjoyed this.
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• United States
12 Aug 17
Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting. :)
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
12 Aug 17
I totally and utterly love this one, and I am SO glad the poking got you to POST this!!!
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• Centralia, Missouri
13 Aug 17
@Pennicash I am quite glad I did, this place can fun, and the fact you make a few pennies while having fun is worthwhile.
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• United States
12 Aug 17
Thanks for poking so much!
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@sallypup (57836)
• Centralia, Washington
13 Aug 17
Beautifully done @Pennicash.
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• United States
14 Aug 17
Thank you so much!
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