~Someday Heart Break Will Be Worth It~

Valdosta, Georgia
August 21, 2017 2:15pm CST
The tears roll down her sweet face, Crying in my arms, I hold her in my embrace, Trying desperately to ease her precious pain. Thinking back to the first heart break of my own, The thought brings tears to my eyes, Remembering the feeling of that pain, feeling so alone, Knowing now my pain was a blessing in disguise. Someday she will look back at this distant memory, She will see God's work was at hand, With time I know she will again be at peace, One day God will send "her" perfect man... I wrote this poem for my oldest daughter's heart break. She was broken up with yesterday... Image from Pixabay
26 people like this
33 responses
@DianneN (246334)
• United States
21 Aug 17
Beautiful poem written by a truly, loving mother. We never want to see our children hurting.
4 people like this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@DianneN Thank you. =) No, I hate seeing my kids in any kind of pain-like most mothers.
1 person likes this
@DianneN (246334)
• United States
21 Aug 17
1 person likes this
@sabtraversa (12808)
• Italy
21 Aug 17
Aww, that's so sweet of yours. Thanks for sharing the poem with us.
3 people like this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@sabtraversa Thanks for reading it. =)
3 people like this
• United States
22 Aug 17
I remember my children crying over a lost love. Thinking they were not worthy. The why's and what they could have done to keep him. You just hold them, love them, and listen. And hope their young hearts heal quickly.
1 person likes this
• United States
22 Aug 17
@LovingMyBabies She has you to help her along.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@Elusivebutterfly Yeah, it's so sad. She's dealing with it so well though, I am very proud of her.
2 people like this
@allknowing (130067)
• India
22 Aug 17
Nice poem. She should spend more time with her studies at her age.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@allknowing She spends plenty of time on school work, thanks.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@allknowing She wasn't dating him at 10, she had a crush on him at that age. I did a discussion and lot's of girls like boys at younger ages. It's perfectly normal.
1 person likes this
@prashu228 (37526)
• India
22 Aug 17
Glad she is handling it well. It's a blessing in disguise
2 people like this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@prashu228 Thank you. It is. =)
2 people like this
@LadyDuck (457212)
• Switzerland
22 Aug 17
Do I remember well she already was heart broke a few months ago with this boy and then he became her first boyfriend?
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@Ladyduck Yeah, same boy. =( He said he has to end it because he's not focusing enough on school.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@LadyDuck Yes they are young and have plenty of time!
2 people like this
@LadyDuck (457212)
• Switzerland
22 Aug 17
@LovingMyBabies Well, they are so young, it surely is an excuse to break.
1 person likes this
@jstory07 (134232)
• Roseburg, Oregon
21 Aug 17
Tell her that means she is meant for someone else when the time is right.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@jstory07 I told her either the timing isn't right or the person isn't right-either way it's a blessing in disguise.
1 person likes this
@jstory07 (134232)
• Roseburg, Oregon
21 Aug 17
@LovingMyBabies It sure is.
1 person likes this
@poehere (15126)
• French Polynesia
22 Aug 17
That is so sweet and so true. At that age it is so hard. But like you said one day she will find the perfect man and life will be so happy.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@poehere Yeah, it was sad but she's doing really well with everything. I am proud of her. =)
1 person likes this
@poehere (15126)
• French Polynesia
22 Aug 17
@LovingMyBabies You are such a loving mom, she is lucky to have you. I wished my mom was more loving and kind, but she wasn't.
1 person likes this
@JESSY3236 (18886)
• United States
22 Aug 17
pretty poem.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@JESSY3236 Thank you. =)
2 people like this
@Courtlynn (66921)
• United States
21 Aug 17
Aw man! She will be ok, she has many years and boys ahead.. sorry Jen lol
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@Courtlynn She's handling it better than I did when I was younger! I'm proud of her. =) And yes, there will be many more to come... Ugh. Lol.
1 person likes this
@Courtlynn (66921)
• United States
21 Aug 17
@LovingMyBabies yay! So happy to hear that. One tough cookie you seem to have there.
1 person likes this
@andriaperry (116860)
• Anniston, Alabama
22 Aug 17
Oh No! Poor baby!
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@andriaperry Yeah it was sad but she's handling it well.
1 person likes this
@ilocosboy (45157)
• Philippines
22 Aug 17
What i see is a loving mother that in her arms comforted her child. Live the poem.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@ilocosboy Thank you! =) My kids can come to me about anything.
1 person likes this
@ilocosboy (45157)
• Philippines
24 Aug 17
@LovingMyBabies that is such a good relationship between you and your kids. Not all parents are like that and not all children can tell their worries to parents.
@Yadah04 (3363)
• Philippines
22 Aug 17
that was so sweet of you to write her a poem. that was consoling and comforting.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@Yadah04 Thank you. =)
1 person likes this
@shaynas (5488)
• India
22 Aug 17
You put is so beautifully!! Hope she gets over it soon!
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@shaynas Thank you! =) She's handling it well.
2 people like this
@KrauseHome (36448)
• United States
22 Aug 17
First ones are the hardest. Glad she has a Mom like you to help you get thru it
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@Krausehome Thank you! =)
1 person likes this
@AmbiePam (85240)
• United States
21 Aug 17
That's a beautiful poem. Bless her heart; it's so stinking painful.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@Ambiepam Thank you. I know, I hate heart break.
1 person likes this
@quantum2020 (12040)
• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico
21 Aug 17
Your daughter will soon find another person with whom she will ragain internal peace and continue her search for harmony
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@quantum2020 Yes, she has plenty of years and time for that-God willing. =)
1 person likes this
@sishy7 (27169)
• Australia
22 Aug 17
It's nice that she has you there for her... I went through mine on my own... I don't know if my Mom had any idea at the time or not but for sure I didn't even want her to know or talk about it...
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@sishy7 I went through mine on my own as well and I always swore my children would be able to come talk to me about anything...and they can. =)
1 person likes this
@marlina (154166)
• Canada
21 Aug 17
Beautiful words.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
21 Aug 17
@marlina Thank you. =)
2 people like this
• Eugene, Oregon
22 Aug 17
A lovely poem, keep it for her for sure.
1 person likes this
• Valdosta, Georgia
22 Aug 17
@JamesHxstatic Thank you, I will. =)
2 people like this