A Beggar Poem

saphotoco / flick
By S.L
@Xiasses (339)
September 6, 2017 10:21pm CST
I sat. I stretched and opened my dirty hands. I listened to the sounds of the crowd that passed by. I stared at their feet. Hoping I will find a friend who will drop a coin into my palm.
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@mandala100 (35785)
• Hong Kong
7 Sep
@Xiasses That's one common manifestation of poverty my friend.
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@Xiasses (339)
7 Sep
Poverty is rampant. It is really sad to see them alone in a corner.
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@mandala100 (35785)
• Hong Kong
7 Sep
@Xiasses You are right my friend and that's always so sad.
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@JeeyanDee (2722)
7 Sep
That's really sad.
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@Xiasses (339)
7 Sep
True.
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@JeeyanDee (2722)
8 Sep
@Xiasses Your poem was short but it feels like that is what beggars really feel.
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@Xiasses (339)
8 Sep
@JeeyanDee Thank you.
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• Nairobi, Kenya
7 Sep
Nice poem. :) I can relate
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@Xiasses (339)
7 Sep
Thank you!
• Nairobi, Kenya
7 Sep
@Xiasses You are welcomed. :)
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@gtdoss (23)
7 Sep
Really enjoyed your poem. I have also written some poetry, kind of offbeat like this, and my family and friends have liked it. Sometimes poetry sums up what can otherwise be lost in translation. Keep up the good work!
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@Xiasses (339)
8 Sep
Thank you for dropping your thoughts! See you around!
@augusta123 (4351)
7 Sep
No, you drop a coin into my palm.would you?
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@Xiasses (339)
7 Sep
Yes if you are a beggar.
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• Indonesia
7 Sep
I never give coins to beggars, I give enough for them to buy food. not because I am richer, but because I am grateful, God still gives me the opportunity to eat on time even in shortcomings
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@Xiasses (339)
7 Sep
God bless you! .
@jstory07 (65358)
• Roseburg, Oregon
7 Sep
I hope the beggars get some money.
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@Xiasses (339)
7 Sep
I hope so.
@prashu228 (25821)
• India
7 Sep
Good lines.. have a great day
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