Tomorrow's Inspiration

Rising Sun
@dodoazo (6300)
Philippines
September 12, 2017 9:46am CST
I am about to sleep for my eyes are already heavy, but I try to write this short poem for tomorrow's inspiration. "I Call It a Day" The sun goes down Fowls gather up and down To their place of refuge, secured Protected and assured. Working people do likewise In a hurry to homeward wise To be in their own family Safe, sound, and happy. Nightfall, peaceful and calm Soothing breeze like a scented balm Making you and me to fall asleep For tomorrow's job to upkeep. Goodnight, friends! Note: This is to be reposted to my poetry blog, "Verses Expressed".
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@shubhu3 (8686)
• New Delhi, India
12 Sep
It is beautiful.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
12 Sep
I'm glad you like it. Thank you.
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@shubhu3 (8686)
• New Delhi, India
13 Sep
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
@shubhu3 a smile is worth a thousand praises. Thanks.
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@sharon6345 (98333)
• United States
12 Sep
I wish my eyes could feel like that. good night.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
12 Sep
May you have a goodnight sleep.
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@1hopefulman (17387)
• Canada
13 Sep
Very nice and a very appropriate title. !
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
Thanks. Probably you're also a poet. Aren't you?
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@1hopefulman (17387)
• Canada
13 Sep
@dodoazo How do you know That it is so
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
@1hopefulman I just guess it on the way you comment.
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• Nairobi, Kenya
13 Sep
Nice poem . If you add rhyming words at the end of lines it will be perfect. :) I like the message
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
Thanks for the suggestion. Yes, I will edit it.
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• Nairobi, Kenya
13 Sep
@dodoazo Then you did a good job. :) Your mind is very awake even when you feel sleepy
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
@mildredtabitha I have already edited it. What do you think?
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@JustBhem (12968)
• Philippines
13 Sep
What a wonderful poem you have in there.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
Your liking makes me great though I am not a good poet.
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@JustBhem (12968)
• Philippines
13 Sep
@dodoazo But you are. Go with that passion.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
@JustBhem you bet. I do my best.
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@Tracy04 (9988)
• Malaysia
14 Sep
I enjoyed the read.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
14 Sep
You perk me up. That's an inspiration. Thanks.
@buenavida (7419)
• Sweden
14 Sep
Nice poem.. We might all become inspired to compose some poems..
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
14 Sep
Why not? However poem may be interpreted in different point of view unless the poet tells it what itt all about. Only a few could read the poem behind the lines.
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@ilocosboy (24708)
• Philippines
13 Sep
I like the poem I like the photo The moment you claim My hats off to you.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
13 Sep
That's more than a compliment. Thanks.
@singhisback (1603)
• Jalandhar, India
12 Sep
You're surely a very good writer
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
12 Sep
It inspires me. Thanks.
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@Corbin5 (69855)
• United States
12 Sep
Thank you for those lovely words. Wishing you a wonderful night ahead.
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@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
12 Sep
It's a pleasure that you appreciate my short poem. Goodnight
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@Kandae11 (21766)
12 Sep
Have a peaceful night's rest.
@dodoazo (6300)
• Philippines
12 Sep
You'll have a goodnight sleep too.