Unbreakable Love.....
By Sue21
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
Pamplona, Spain
February 9, 2018 3:47pm CST
Ages ago a young boy loved a girl
Okay you might retort so what´s new about that?
They loved each other but she was from afar
Despite all the love they felt
Families from both sides did not feel the same
Such was the pressure and despite all their deep deep love
He ran off and escaped from it all
Most likely never to see her again
Years did pass and with a great regret which weighed in his heart
He almost gave up living he did with yet another woman part
For his true love was there beyond those seas
She was also carrying a broken heart
He went and found her right across to her land
He went on his knees and in front of her and pressed beautiful flowers into her hands
"Marry me and forget the rest" long enough have we suffered and have been put to the test"
They both agreed to marry and now live together
Such a love was meant to be and no one will break them up ever.
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12 responses
@1hopefulman (45123)
• Canada
9 Feb 18
Ohhh! That is so nice! Did you know these people or it is just a poem that you wrote?
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
9 Feb 18
Its based on a true story actually so I can´t say who it is exactly but it is true nontheless.
Thank you.
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@1hopefulman (45123)
• Canada
9 Feb 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 I love stories that end nicely.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
9 Feb 18
@1hopefulman
So do I as well.
I love some romantic Films but do not like their endings such as the one "Last Of the Mohicans" the one with Cora and Uncas in.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
Thank you Di and they did have a lot of problems with their Families yes indeed they did.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
@DianneN
Not sad no they are together and love each other.
They have eventually overcome all the problems that they had.
The woman said yes the first time to getting married to him and asked him what took him so long?
Quite funny but very touching too.
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@DianneN (246647)
• United States
10 Feb 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 So this is based on someone you know? How sad!
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
10 Feb 18
perfect poem-story for the weekend before Valentine's - well done
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
Thank you as I said before its someone I know and I actually did not give St. Valentine´s Day a thought till much later.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
11 Feb 18
@arthurchappell
Yes an extra edge as love happens not just on the 14th of February its any day of the year.
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
11 Feb 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 romance is universal, not just for Valentines - it just gives it extra edge at this time of year
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@Letranknight2015 (51509)
• Philippines
10 Feb 18
Nice story, sadly it doesn't happen to most people. Others either it's not enough or it's not right.
Lucky for them.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
Lots of great love stories except that you never get to hear about them very much I would say.
Yes and there are love stories of the other kind also you are so right.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
9 Feb 18
To be honest I did not think about that one you know and I was thinking of that man´s love for his first girlfriend and how they were forced to split up.
Thank you Fredo and I love St. Valentine´s Day too.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
@amadeo
Have a great day ahead Fredo and enjoy your Dinner both of you.
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@amadeo (111948)
• United States
9 Feb 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 same here.Have a good one
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
I have a thing about happy endings as well.
Although I know there are bad endings I am only staying with the good ending ones.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
11 Feb 18
@JudyEv
Another reason why I avoid them all I can and I know that they happen but just don´t want to see it end like that and I know how it ends already.
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@JudyEv (325654)
• Rockingham, Australia
11 Feb 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 Life's too short to cope with bad/sad endings.
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@BelleStarr (61047)
• United States
10 Feb 18
It is always lovely when lover survives trials and the lovers finally get together.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Feb 18
Yes because it was quite a time after that they did get together.
One missed the other so much.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
3 Mar 18
No, its not really but it could sort of tie in with what we went through also.
We were never helped by either family either.
The point is that the poem is about another couple who fell in love very young with huge opposition from the families.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
2 Mar 18
Thanks and I love this story as its so true as I am here right now.
He ran off but came back as love called him back and she forgave him all in that very moment.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
3 Mar 18
@just4him
I should say it was wonderful so much so that I had to see it to believe it myself.
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@just4him (305965)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
3 Mar 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 That's wonderful!
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Feb 18
It really did happen and its true that he got scared the first time and ran off as he was very young and much much later on he plucked up the courage to go and see her and propose to her.
A story in a million.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Feb 18
@cintol
No not me although something similar has happened to me in that sense in the one I am with.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
2 Mar 18
He pressed the flowers into her hands and asked her on his knees to marry him and to forgive him.
Now how many would to that nowadays?
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
3 Mar 18
@thelme55
No and alas its all rush rush rush and no time to think of romance like before.
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@thelme55 (76476)
• Germany
2 Mar 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 Very romantic. I don´t think many would do that nowadays.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
12 Feb 18
It is in a way yes and actually it can fit a few people´s love story too in a way also.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
13 Feb 18
@nela13
If only all love stories would end so well as that one.
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@nela13 (55698)
• Portugal
12 Feb 18
@lovinangelsinstead21 Yes, some people need to break walls be have a Happy end.
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