A View From My Rooftop (Poem)

Philippines
May 13, 2018 2:57am CST
Just wanting to share this poem I wrote years back... Passing vehicles, countless and never-ending passersby Cool breeze of soft wind dampen the skin Peaceful kind of feeling underneath and within;   Random memories keep on crawling in; Music plays in the background gives chills on the chin; There are no stars in sight that shine so bright But I know they are near yet so far;   When the clock strikes nine in the evening I know Anticipation draws near but excitement cannot show; Right behind that wheel of a passing car There’s a pinch in the heart which has been scarred Unhappy soul wishing to see a glimpse or sight Of a beautiful face with a silent war to fight!   Slowly darkness starts crawling in With a promise of a new sunrise there in; Before things begin to unravel Just enjoying the view from the rooftop with marvel!
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@allen0187 (33449)
• Philippines
13 May
Good poem! Well written! This is my favorite verse: Slowly darkness starts crawling in With a promise of a new sunrise there in; Before things begin to unravel Just enjoying the view from the rooftop with marvel!
@Icydoll (22157)
• India
13 May
Very nice poem my dear friend
@aureliah (16660)
13 May
You are a very good writer I can tell from this poem
@Teekaaa (5660)
• India
13 May
Nice poem my friend! Thanks for sharing!
@Jessabuma (33004)
• Baguio, Philippines
13 May
Wow!! It's a very nice poem.. thanks for sharing