I'm not only a poet but a trying hard songwriter

@simplfred (20614)
Philippines
July 5, 2018 6:41am CST
I've told you then that I really enjoy writing poetry. Beside that I love to write lyrics that goes with a tune in my mind. The sad thing is I don't know how to play any musical instruments. Here is one of my so called song. (It takes me a lot of courage to post this... Ha ha) I hope you enjoy! Thanks....
There's something in the future that I hate to see Oh if I, could only stop the time If I, could only read your mind Honesly i'm afraid girl. II There's some...
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@rakski (112993)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
wow, nice! I hope there is someone who can arrange music for you.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
I hope so too, my friend plus a good singer to sing it... ha ha.
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• Philippines
5 Jul 18
@simplfred maybe @jessabuma can sing it for you
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@chicnthin (3034)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
I tried to compose a song but i was having a hard time to develop a beautiful melodies.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Just catch the tune quickly, because most of the tunes they just pass by.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
@chicnthin Yeah, me too, that's why I recorded the tune I think sometimes.
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@chicnthin (3034)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
@simplfred there are times that i think some good melody but i forgot it quickly
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@1hopefulman (45125)
• Canada
5 Jul 18
I love the lyrics. I wish you success!
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@1hopefulman (45125)
• Canada
5 Jul 18
@simplfred It was my pleasure.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Thank you so much, and thank you for really visiting and giving positive response to my song in YT.
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@neelia_lyn (2003)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Keep it up, sir!
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Thank you so much Kabayan.
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@Shavkat (136864)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
I think that's a good start. You can try to join a singing contest. Would you like me to share it? It might become viral.
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@Shavkat (136864)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Ha ha... Singing is not my thing. You see, I have a voice of a dying gorilla. Just song writing.
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@mlgen1037 (29901)
• Manila, Philippines
5 Jul 18
Hi Fred! Wow. You write good songs/poem.
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@mlgen1037 (29901)
• Manila, Philippines
6 Jul 18
@simplfred Always a pleasure, my friend. Keep it up. I would like to hear more.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Thank you so much Louise...
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@SIMPLYD (90727)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
If you like it then keep doing it. And just keep posting it on youtube. Who knows somebody great will like it and contact you.
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@SIMPLYD (90727)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
Ha ha... that's a big dream. Anyway, who knows.
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@id_peace (14010)
• Singapore
5 Jul 18
You are talented. I tried and could not do so.
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@id_peace (14010)
• Singapore
5 Jul 18
Thank you so much. I can write stories but never peotry or verse.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
@id_peace That's great my friend. I used to like writing story but I discontinued because I don't have much time so I just focus on poetry.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Thank you my friend. Try again my friend, if some tune lingers in your mind be quick to catch it and add some words. Record it so it won't fly away.
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@ridingbet (66861)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
i think you should join the "himig handog" of ABS-CBN about searching for aspiring songwriters, composers and
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@ridingbet (66861)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
@simplfred your talent should be shown to other people too. it is better to show off God's talent He gave you.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
This is just for my hobby my friend. The song enter there are works of PROs. he he
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
@ridingbet Very true, my friend. That's why I'm beginning to share mine.
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@dgobucks226 (34196)
12 Jul 18
Writing music and enjoying it is such a great hobby Enjoy!
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@dgobucks226 (34196)
16 Jul 18
@simplfred Enjoy your passions my friend
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
12 Jul 18
Beautiful quote.. Thank You... Enjoy your day..
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@Icydoll (36725)
• India
5 Jul 18
Wow that's nice dear friend..
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Thank You, my friend.
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@Jessabuma (31706)
• Baguio, Philippines
5 Jul 18
Nice lyrics. I watched it on YouTube.
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@Jessabuma (31706)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Jul 18
@simplfred you're welcome kabayan
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
9 Jul 18
Thank you, Kabayan.
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• Baguio, Philippines
5 Jul 18
Go go go! You are gifted, share your talent for others to enjoy. This is a great step towards realizing your passion.
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
5 Jul 18
Ha ha... Thank you Laureen!