I'm not feeling well
@simplfred (20608)
Philippines
July 16, 2018 6:28am CST
I'm not feeling well
I think I need to burst this out
Seems transparent liquid rice will flow
Because of bad seeds that sprout
I'm not feeling well
Seems every good things going out
Every second darkness glow
I need to silence this scary shout
I'm not feeling well
I know you don't know what this is all about
I may not let you know
But surely, I'm trying to spell it out...
July 16, 2018
Mysterious Aries/Simplyfred
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10 responses
@1hopefulman (45123)
• Canada
16 Jul 18
So you ate something that did not agree with you but it inspired you to write a poem about it. So maybe it wasn't so bad after all. Are you ok?
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
16 Jul 18
I'm not really okay but since I put some of my tears in this piece I think I can now carry the burden. Thank You...
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@1hopefulman (45123)
• Canada
16 Jul 18
@simplfred Do you have some chronic health challenge or are just having a bad day?
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
16 Jul 18
@1hopefulman Just visited by a bad day my friend but it's going well now... thank you...
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@amitkokiladitya (171936)
• Agra, India
16 Jul 18
Just try to look at the good things around you. You will start feeling better
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
16 Jul 18
Yah, I need something to brighten up my nocturnal feelings... Thank you...
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@ridingbet (66857)
• Philippines
17 Jul 18
a poetic manifestation of how you feel. i hope you get well the soonest.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
16 Jul 18
Not much my friend but it is just one of those days... Tomorrow is another story... Thanks.
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@Hannihar (129376)
• Israel
16 Jul 18
@simplfred
Sorry you are not feeling well.
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