New Limerick - "There Once Was a Girl from the City"

@lovebuglena (43059)
Staten Island, New York
July 31, 2018 3:08pm CST
I felt the urge to write a limerick just now. Here it is for your enjoyment. There once was a girl from the city She thought in her dress she looked pretty But a guy came along Told her she was wrong She should trash this dress made by Ditty What do you guys think?
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@MALUSE (69416)
• Germany
31 Jul 18
Is 'Ditty' a woman's name by chance? If so, you could substitute it for Betty.
@MALUSE (69416)
• Germany
31 Jul 18
@lovebuglena I've just checked. Yes, there is. It's a surname. So there, limerick saved. It must be perfect, you know. Last name: Ditty. Recorded in a number of spellings including Dite, Ditt, and Ditte, the patronymics Ditts and Dittson, the diminutives Dittie and Ditty, and the occupational Diter, Ditter and Ditour, this is an English surname. Surname Database: Ditty Last Name Origin
www.surnamedb.com/Surname/Ditty
@lovebuglena (43059)
• Staten Island, New York
31 Jul 18
@MALUSE Thanks! Changed it!
@lovebuglena (43059)
• Staten Island, New York
31 Jul 18
I don't know if there is but there could be.
@Icydoll (36717)
• India
31 Jul 18
That's a good try my dear friend..
@lovebuglena (43059)
• Staten Island, New York
31 Jul 18
Thanks. I updated the last line.
@MALUSE (69416)
• Germany
31 Jul 18
@lovebuglena Oh no! Delete the last line! No explanations and questions as to the quality of your rhymes. Take Betty out, put Ditty in. Don't mention me and everything will be just fine. " (originally had Betty instead of Ditty)" --- Away with this! Nobody wants to know that now.
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@Courtlynn (66921)
• United States
3 Aug 18
I think its good, but dang that guy
@Kandae11 (53678)
31 Jul 18
Very nice.
@lovebuglena (43059)
• Staten Island, New York
1 Aug 18
Today is a great day. Wrote many limericks. Didn't expect that. Decided I will work on a limerick book.
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