Yes... Keep Going!

September 3, 2018 11:44pm CST
The moment I feel I Can't go on anymore I think I ll quit I can't bear this at all I am done with my life I don't think I ll be fine These hardships are killing me I am done with the hagemony The world is fake That's all I know Even if you try No one will STAND BY YOU! But then I just wonder What will happen if I ponder Over my distress again and Again Nobody will ever know it No one 's gonna help me Will this leave me broken? No way.. I can't quit now Yeah, I need to rise and shine Touch the million hearts Whose life is same as mine I wish to inspire Make them realise Yes.. Just keep going! To all those who read this... What do you think about it?!
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@banksim (5195)
4 Sep 18
good poem and thought
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4 Sep 18
@banksim Thanks a lot..
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@banksim (5195)
6 Sep 18
@ANAYAtair you are welcome my friend
@Shavkat (136497)
• Philippines
4 Sep 18
That's nice thoughts of yours.
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@Shavkat (136497)
• Philippines
4 Sep 18
@ANAYAtair You are very much welcome.
4 Sep 18
@Shavkat thank you
@Shivram59 (31147)
• India
4 Sep 18
@ANAYAtair Wow!! Good poem.There is a poet in you.
4 Sep 18
@Shivram59 thank you..
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@Shivram59 (31147)
• India
6 Sep 18
@ANAYAtair You are always most welcome,dear friend.
@deba12 (2951)
• India
4 Sep 18
Good poem. I was desperately looking for such a poem. Completely speaks of my mind.
4 Sep 18
@deba12 Thank you.. I just spoke my mind..
@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
4 Sep 18
That's a nice way to look at it. Nice work.
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4 Sep 18
@simplfred thank you... I HOPE I can be better
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@simplfred (20614)
• Philippines
4 Sep 18
@ANAYAtair As long as hope still lingers on... The home of a true smile still on earth...
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