A Christmas challenge
By John Welford
@indexer (4852)
Leicester, England
December 17, 2018 6:44am CST
This week's challenge for the Hinckley Scribblers is to write a story with a Christmas theme that is exactly 100 words long. This is my effort:
Over the Christmas period he sent her a weird assortment of presents, including people of varied social statuses, poultry, other types of bird, pear trees and gold rings. At first the gifts were welcome, but the novelty soon wore off. She felt she had no choice but to send the whole lot back. The postage cost her a fortune, especially as the lords kept leaping out of the boxes she put them in, as did the dancing ladies, and the pipers and drummers were so noisy. That was why she decided to defray her expenses by keeping the gold rings.
Do you want to have a go yourself?
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16 responses
@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
17 Dec 18
Thanks. There is a bit of a competition involved here. We are all supposed to drop our stories on to the table, get them mixed together, and have them read out anonymously. We will then vote on which is the best. I am not aware of any of our members being on MyLot, so my anonymity should last until Friday!
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
18 Dec 18
I do not think I can match this but will try I bet yours will be chosen as the best.( I too would keep the gold rings) (lol)
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@xander6464 (40872)
• Wapello, Iowa
17 Dec 18
I agree with Val (@valmnz). Loved reading this.
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@Fleura (29126)
• United Kingdom
26 Dec 18
Here's my 100 words:
On the first day of Christmas my true love said to me “A partridge in a pear tree”. I thought perhaps it was a clue to a hidden a surprise. I looked all around our pear tree in the garden but couldn’t find anything.
The second day he whispered ‘Two turtle doves’ – doesn’t he know they are now rare in this country? On the third day it was ‘Three French hens’ – our neighbours keep Cochins but I didn’t want to be caught snooping in their garden. I know lovers are supposed to whisper ‘sweet nothings’ but this was getting silly.
This was inspired by Little One singing 'my true love said to me' rather than 'sent to me' - I tried to explain that it wasn't the right words but when I thought about it they are both just as strange!
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
26 Dec 18
Yes - that's good! I think that "true loves" - adult ones that is - can get treatment for making strange statements like these!
@MarshaMusselman (38652)
• Midland, Michigan
17 Jan 19
It looks to me like he missed your response. I just happened to be here because I was looking for something specific. I would say that I'd miss your participation, but I didn't do one either. I planned on reading them all but never got around to that either.
@cmoneyspinner (9221)
• Austin, Texas
17 Dec 18
I love your story. Keeping the gold rings. I don't think I could top that. The woman was such a practical thinker.
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@MarshaMusselman (38652)
• Midland, Michigan
23 Dec 18
That was great fun, thanks. I've read two others, maybe three.
do you offer these challenges on a regular basis? If so, might I make a suggestions. Most people here don't understand the tags. I hoped to find all these together under one tag on one page, but no one is using the same tag so they have to be found other ways or not found at all.
If you do challenge prompts, would you consider asking people that participate to use the same tags? One person used: 100 word christmas story, Anna used Christmas story 100 words, I don't know what the others used if anything.
I can also suggest this to the group, but then someone needs to decide which group of words to use in which order.
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@MarshaMusselman (38652)
• Midland, Michigan
24 Dec 18
@indexer Yes, and had I seen this the first day, I would have suggested it then. Now it's a bit too late. Were you on bubblews? There were many challenge ideas there and those that suggested the ideas usually suggested some tags to use.
I don't think that most members understand the profit of using the tags or even realize it helps find similar posts.
@kobesbuddy (74545)
• East Tawas, Michigan
17 Dec 18
Sure, I'd love to join in the fun:)
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@responsiveme (22926)
• India
18 Dec 18
I love this.
You did a good job on that song.
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@xander6464 (40872)
• Wapello, Iowa
17 Dec 18
I love these challenges but they scare me. I might try this one, though. Keeping to exactly 100 words is scary but not as scary as some others, such as, "Write an entire story not using the letter "e" even once." Two people wrote novels without e's so some think a story should be no big deal.
So maybe I will try the 100-word challenge.
@Jeanniemaries (8237)
• United States
18 Dec 18
Yes by day 8 it would have been overwhelming! LOL, great story! I may have a go at it in a couple of days.