A Christmas challenge

@indexer (4852)
Leicester, England
December 17, 2018 6:44am CST
This week's challenge for the Hinckley Scribblers is to write a story with a Christmas theme that is exactly 100 words long. This is my effort: Over the Christmas period he sent her a weird assortment of presents, including people of varied social statuses, poultry, other types of bird, pear trees and gold rings. At first the gifts were welcome, but the novelty soon wore off. She felt she had no choice but to send the whole lot back. The postage cost her a fortune, especially as the lords kept leaping out of the boxes she put them in, as did the dancing ladies, and the pipers and drummers were so noisy. That was why she decided to defray her expenses by keeping the gold rings. Do you want to have a go yourself?
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@JudyEv (325696)
• Rockingham, Australia
17 Dec 18
That's really good - and entertaining.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
17 Dec 18
Thanks. There is a bit of a competition involved here. We are all supposed to drop our stories on to the table, get them mixed together, and have them read out anonymously. We will then vote on which is the best. I am not aware of any of our members being on MyLot, so my anonymity should last until Friday!
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
17 Dec 18
@JudyEv I think we'll have the same problem!
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@JudyEv (325696)
• Rockingham, Australia
17 Dec 18
@indexer Good luck. I don't know about your group but with ours it isn't hard usually to work out who wrote what.
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@LadyDuck (458006)
• Switzerland
17 Dec 18
I have to think about this, may be I will try.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
17 Dec 18
Please do, although I won't be able to enter you for the Scribblers competition!
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@LadyDuck (458006)
• Switzerland
17 Dec 18
@indexer I have to finish to fill some important forms, I hope to have a little time later to think something to write.
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@akalinus (40440)
• United States
17 Dec 18
@indexer Are some people excluded? Where is Hinckley anyway?
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
18 Dec 18
I do not think I can match this but will try I bet yours will be chosen as the best.( I too would keep the gold rings) (lol)
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@allknowing (130066)
• India
18 Dec 18
@indexer I have accepted your challenge.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
18 Dec 18
Our members are very inventive, so my chances of triumph are slim!
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@valmnz (17099)
• New Zealand
17 Dec 18
Loved reading this John. I'm glad someone pointed me in your direction.
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@xander6464 (40872)
• Wapello, Iowa
17 Dec 18
I agree with Val (@valmnz). Loved reading this.
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@akalinus (40440)
• United States
17 Dec 18
I did not know about this group but am already formulating a story in my head. It is about the two doves meeting and falling in love. They get married on Christmas day. Thanks @LadyDuck for your suggestion
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@LadyDuck (458006)
• Switzerland
18 Dec 18
You are welcome, I am glad if you join.
@LadyDuck (458006)
• Switzerland
20 Dec 18
@akalinus It is surely from the UK, the town of Hinckley is in England.
@akalinus (40440)
• United States
20 Dec 18
@LadyDuck I think it is for England. Or is it everyone?
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@Fleura (29126)
• United Kingdom
26 Dec 18
Here's my 100 words: On the first day of Christmas my true love said to me “A partridge in a pear tree”. I thought perhaps it was a clue to a hidden a surprise. I looked all around our pear tree in the garden but couldn’t find anything. The second day he whispered ‘Two turtle doves’ – doesn’t he know they are now rare in this country? On the third day it was ‘Three French hens’ – our neighbours keep Cochins but I didn’t want to be caught snooping in their garden. I know lovers are supposed to whisper ‘sweet nothings’ but this was getting silly. This was inspired by Little One singing 'my true love said to me' rather than 'sent to me' - I tried to explain that it wasn't the right words but when I thought about it they are both just as strange!
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
26 Dec 18
Yes - that's good! I think that "true loves" - adult ones that is - can get treatment for making strange statements like these!
@bagarad (14283)
• Paso Robles, California
28 Dec 18
It's a bit late for me to try to think up something, since Christmas has come and gone. I don't really tell stories, so you won't miss my participation. .
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• Midland, Michigan
17 Jan 19
It looks to me like he missed your response. I just happened to be here because I was looking for something specific. I would say that I'd miss your participation, but I didn't do one either. I planned on reading them all but never got around to that either.
• Austin, Texas
17 Dec 18
I love your story. Keeping the gold rings. I don't think I could top that. The woman was such a practical thinker.
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• Midland, Michigan
23 Dec 18
That was great fun, thanks. I've read two others, maybe three. do you offer these challenges on a regular basis? If so, might I make a suggestions. Most people here don't understand the tags. I hoped to find all these together under one tag on one page, but no one is using the same tag so they have to be found other ways or not found at all. If you do challenge prompts, would you consider asking people that participate to use the same tags? One person used: 100 word christmas story, Anna used Christmas story 100 words, I don't know what the others used if anything. I can also suggest this to the group, but then someone needs to decide which group of words to use in which order.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
23 Dec 18
That is tricky, because it is not something you can guarantee. If you are writing a series of posts yourself, of course you can use the same tag, but otherwise one can only suggest!
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• Midland, Michigan
24 Dec 18
@indexer Yes, and had I seen this the first day, I would have suggested it then. Now it's a bit too late. Were you on bubblews? There were many challenge ideas there and those that suggested the ideas usually suggested some tags to use. I don't think that most members understand the profit of using the tags or even realize it helps find similar posts.
@JudyEv (325696)
• Rockingham, Australia
17 Dec 18
I've just posted mine. Thanks for the suggestion.
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@cindiowens (5120)
• North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 Dec 18
Very clever.
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@kobesbuddy (74545)
• East Tawas, Michigan
17 Dec 18
Sure, I'd love to join in the fun:)
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@responsiveme (22926)
• India
18 Dec 18
I love this. You did a good job on that song.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
18 Dec 18
Thanks!
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@Courage7 (19633)
• United States
18 Dec 18
Lovely John I so love your writing thanks for sharing it. I love that drawing too.
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@xander6464 (40872)
• Wapello, Iowa
17 Dec 18
I love these challenges but they scare me. I might try this one, though. Keeping to exactly 100 words is scary but not as scary as some others, such as, "Write an entire story not using the letter "e" even once." Two people wrote novels without e's so some think a story should be no big deal. So maybe I will try the 100-word challenge.
• United States
18 Dec 18
Yes by day 8 it would have been overwhelming! LOL, great story! I may have a go at it in a couple of days.