Your love has slowly killed me

Bekasi, Indonesia
December 18, 2018 2:06pm CST
Love someone without understanding the image Wait without thinking of pauses Expect things that you never have I am like someone who has something to never have I wish I could sing, I will sing a poem about a feeling that I've been Immersion in my heart The word love is embroidered beautifully for you How come the breeze blew a light night, can you say it Whispered my heart in his ear, that I was suffering now
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@avi256 (8489)
• Pune, India
18 Dec 18
A very beautiful romantic poem with a pinch of pain...
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@avi256 (8489)
• Pune, India
19 Dec 18
@KOLAMsegaran1 But you had just found the true and real love of your life some days back.
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
@avi256 From there I feel very bad, the days I went with with him did not bring positive results, and I did not believe all this would happen. Love is so hard to guess. The person I love so much turns out he feels this is normal. and I don't know what that means. he looks normal when responding to my heart's expression. From here I made a poem expressing my heart which was falling apart
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
yes, maybe that's how I feel right now, Heart is so sad because love feels unreal, I can only daydream with sadness
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@quantum2020 (12040)
• Ciudad De Mexico, Mexico
19 Dec 18
That is a very deep kind of thinking for someone who´s captured your heart
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
at least I can express all the feelings that make me restless and anxious
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@flapiz (22402)
• United Kingdom
19 Dec 18
Love is beautiful but can also bring so much suffering. I hope your heart will be strong and keep on.
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
yes, as you know, that now my heart feels broken not left, love makes me suffer, life feels empty I guess
@nitsbubb (1308)
• Pune, India
19 Dec 18
Very nicely written!!! Excellent rhyming but slight sadness is seen!
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
yes, maybe writing like this with a little expressing feelings in my heart
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@sofssu (23662)
19 Dec 18
Nice.
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
@ilocosboy (45157)
• Philippines
19 Dec 18
Love the poem
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
Yes, it is true
@BelleStarr (61047)
• United States
19 Dec 18
Well done, you have a very nice way with a word.
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
yes, maybe that's how I feel right now, Heart is so sad because love feels unreal, I can only daydream with sadness Love seems to be killing me slowly
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@DianneN (246525)
• United States
18 Dec 18
Nice!
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
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@just4him (305792)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
18 Dec 18
I'm sorry your heart is aching for a lost love.
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• Bekasi, Indonesia
19 Dec 18
yes, maybe that's how I feel right now, it's so hard to live like this,
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