An Inspirational Poem I Wrote, This Morning

@kobesbuddy (61384)
East Tawas, Michigan
January 8, 2019 10:23am CST
As some of you already know, I'm an amateur writer. Most of these works are short inspirational poems, to draw a person's heart closer to the Lord. This morning, I wrote this very short one and I hope you enjoy it:) 'Accept God's Grace' Many times I've wandered, from the amazing work of grace, A priceless gift I could never earn, to gaze on Jesus face. Troubles I've allowed to turn my sight on things around, As Peter took his eyes off Christ, he sank and might have drown. Yet Jesus reached his hand out, said 'Oh ye of little faith!' Keep your vision on him alone and trust in what God saith.
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@Happy2BeMe (79316)
• Canada
8 Jan
Very well written
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thank you, Laurel:) I love to write poems and some aren't properly punctuated. Yet, it's something that I've always love to do, since I was about ten years old:)
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@Happy2BeMe (79316)
• Canada
8 Jan
@kobesbuddy you are very good at it. I use to write but it has been years since I put anything on paper. I lost my inspiration.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
@Happy2BeMe And so did I, Laurel! Now, I want to get it back again:) On this new medication, it's like somebody opened up the curtains, to let some light back in! Feeling dark and gloomy, is a 'miserable place,' I am determined to leave behind me
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@DianneN (97411)
• United States
8 Jan
That is a very lovely poem.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thanks, Dianne:)
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@DianneN (97411)
• United States
8 Jan
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• United States
12 Jan
A lot of us need reminding of this. Thanks for sharing.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
12 Jan
'Amazing Grace' is a wonderful hymn!
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• United States
12 Jan
@kobesbuddy Yes it is. Powerful.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
12 Jan
@popciclecold It's one of our favorites:)
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@Nevena83 (10234)
• Serbia
8 Jan
Oh, this sounds so good.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thanks, I love to write poetry.
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@Nevena83 (10234)
• Serbia
8 Jan
@kobesbuddy Go ahead, you're great.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
@Nevena83 Thank you
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@just4him (136612)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
8 Jan
That's a very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thanks, Valerie:) It's short but, I tried to cover an important message.
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@just4him (136612)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
10 Jan
@kobesbuddy You did a good job.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
10 Jan
@just4him We love to sing about 'Amazing Grace,' but how many understand what grace entitles us to? It's unmerited favor, from God himself!
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@Marty1 (39803)
• Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
8 Jan
I love it! it is one of your best! Hopefully, you will write more and share with us!
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Now that I'm inspired to write again, I'll try to do a couple a month. Thanks:)
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@Marty1 (39803)
• Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
9 Jan
@kobesbuddy only a couple? i think you are very inspired as this one was the best you've ever written!
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
9 Jan
@Marty1 Thank, Jennifer:)
@Courtlynn (56770)
• United States
10 Jan
Its a nice one
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
10 Jan
Thankyou, Courtney
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@Courtlynn (56770)
• United States
10 Jan
@kobesbuddy welcome
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@sallypup (30661)
• Moses Lake, Washington
8 Jan
Sweet and yet profound.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thank you, Lenore
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@JudyEv (147789)
• Bunbury, Australia
8 Jan
It scans really well. Congratulations.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thanks, Judy:)
@Icydoll (29351)
• India
8 Jan
Very nice and lovely Poem.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thanks, it is short, but it says a lot.
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@1creekgirl (13656)
• United States
8 Jan
Very nice, Kharla. It's so true, if we don't keep our eyes on Jesus, we will "drown."
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thank you:) The care of this world can overwhelm us, at times.
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@Corbin5 (127019)
• United States
8 Jan
A lovely poem with an important message for us all.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
God is the only true source of help, in this world!
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@CarolDM (12300)
• United States
8 Jan
This is very beautiful and inspirational my friend.
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@kobesbuddy (61384)
• East Tawas, Michigan
8 Jan
Thanks, I'm guilty of not allowing God to heal my heart, from pain that I've suffered!