2019 Poem perhaps `` The Colder I Get``

Canada
January 17, 2019 12:57pm CST
The colder I get the further I seem to fade Fade into what I am not certain yet what that is? I wake to the sky with no clouds I wake to the faint sounds of wind no music like before The colder I get the further I seem to fade It’s not that I need an extra blanket Perhaps I have just grown colder to the people who once played a role in my life Perhaps I no longer feel the importance of the way I look The colder I get the further I seem to fade Some may call this depression Some may call this change I know longer have a name for it Just words dancing upon a white screen The colder I get the further I seem to fade As the days pass I will try and pull myself up So as to not fall any deeper Cold is not a game 1 step 1 moment 1 day I will attempt to be me again Yet who is she ? I will find out this year 2019 Irishlasskicker
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@Courage7 (20194)
• United States
17 Jan
This year will be good yeah? Let us sit by the turf fire and have a nice hot cup of tea Chara!!
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• Canada
17 Jan
sounds like a great idea and I hope it will be a great year :) Cheers
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@Courage7 (20194)
• United States
18 Jan
@Irishlasskicker Cheers and Slante
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• Canada
18 Jan
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@FayeHazel (25827)
• United States
17 Jan
Great capture of a tricky feeling
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• Canada
17 Jan
Thanks so much , sometimes I just like to play with words and it helps
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@FayeHazel (25827)
• United States
18 Jan
@Irishlasskicker So welcome. Great output. Impressive. Playing with words. Good way to put it. Way more fun than playing with numbers. (math) uh lol
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• Canada
18 Jan
@FayeHazel Thank you and yes I very much dislike math
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@xander6464 (10703)
• Wapello, Iowa
18 Jan
I recommend Lucky Charms. They have amazing unfading properties.
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• Canada
19 Jan
yes especially the charms I have they are so great and shiny and amazing
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@xander6464 (10703)
• Wapello, Iowa
19 Jan
@Irishlasskicker That's beautiful!
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• Canada
19 Jan
@xander6464 of course I only have beautiful things :)
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@CarolDM (18836)
• United States
21 Jan
I love your style of writing. i hope this will be a better year for all.
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• Canada
21 Jan
aww thanks so much glad you like :) And yes I wish happiness and a good year for all of us
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@CarolDM (18836)
• United States
21 Jan
@Irishlasskicker You have a natural talent.
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• Canada
21 Jan
@CarolDM well thank you so much :) that means a lot :)
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@Wowtalk (477)
• Jamaica
30 Jan
This is one of the most beautiful poem I have ever read on Mylot. Perhaps it's because that the way I feel sometimes. Thanks for sharing.
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• Canada
31 Jan
I am glad you can relate to my poem , one of the reason I enjoy poetry so much :) thank you for stopping by :) and you are welcome :)
@responsiveme (23047)
• India
18 Jan
Detachment ...And attachment that brings it's complications
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• Canada
18 Jan
Yes it brings many complications unfortunately
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@debjani1 (4638)
18 Jan
Very well written. Is this the first time? Carry on. Don't let your talent down.
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• Canada
19 Jan
I write all the time and yes I will carry on so thank you :)