Goodbye And So Long

Philippines
February 16, 2019 5:25am CST
Sitting in my room Thinking of you Wondering about things And the love we share That nothing can compare Oh yes honey my dear But everything had changed I never thought and dream Now we are here arguing Fighting and complaining And you said all are broken It cannot be fixed and it is tearing Goodbye and so long You hear me right and not wrong This is the best decision And no more reconciliation Sorry but sad to say Good luck and be happy No need to think about me I will surely say I will be okay Starting today and come what may...
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Sheali
@Sheali (7461)
• India
16 Feb 19
OMG That is a beautifully written but sad poem.. What made you write this?
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Janeth
@janethwayne (5193)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
Yes sad because it is based of my experiences of my relationship.
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Sheali
@Sheali (7461)
• India
16 Feb 19
@janethwayne Sorry to know that.. I hope you soon get someone special who really cares about you
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Janeth
@janethwayne (5193)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
@Sheali Thank you
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Frederick Espiritu
@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
Well, maybe it is not really meant to be... Very raw poem... Nice one, Kabayan.
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Janeth
@janethwayne (5193)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
Yes Thank you .I know people come to our lives for a reason and they are gone because they are not meant to be.Right.
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Frederick Espiritu
@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
@janethwayne I think so... Solving the puzzle of love is hard, even the puzzle contains two pieces only. The hardest part is finding the other piece because we only hold one piece of it.
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Valerie J. Routhieaux
@just4him (306137)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
16 Feb 19
It's a good poem about heartache and breakup. It leaves the person with a hope they will be all right as they move on from the relationship.
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Janeth
@janethwayne (5193)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
Yes Thank you.
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Diana Bauder
@BloggerDi (3113)
• United States
16 Feb 19
Anyone who has been in a troubled relationship can relate to your poem. I'm sorry for your heartbreak and I wish you the best as you heal and move forward.
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Janeth
@janethwayne (5193)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
Thank you @BloggerDi
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Arya
@yoalldudes (35040)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
I love the last 2 lines. Must be for a special someone.
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Janeth
@janethwayne (5193)
• Philippines
16 Feb 19
Yes it is.Thanks.Well I got plenty of good experiences from the start but later in the end it is all gone.
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Arya
@yoalldudes (35040)
• Philippines
17 Feb 19
@janethwayne The memories are your treasures. You can relive them in your mind whenever you wish and become happy.
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