"BELOVED" please help!!

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Hey guys, I wrote this poem from my heart (real), so please read and make some comments. "Beloved" A Life That Is Full Of Joys, Sorrows, And Smiles Dream Of Someone To Show Up Who Would Make Life Worthwhile! A Beloved To Love Me With All Her Heart And To Dream About Me So That We Will Never Be Apart. A Beloved To Share Every Moment Over A Life Span Who Will Cherish My Happiness And Accept My Sorrows As Her Own. She Will Stand Aside & Eternally Be Amiable Steady Me Should I Ever Stumble. She Will Be What My Dreams Are Made Of And My Eyes Are An Abode For..