My new poem

Italy
January 23, 2007 2:53pm CST
SWEET SMILE. Sweet smile that light to my days, that every day you give me the lost happiness, I want to wake up with you, I want to stay with you all the days, I want to sleep with you. I have fear of don't find you, I have fear of don't have you, I have fear because you are the love given and lived with each smile and without you I couldn't live. My heart is for you and all I want is to have you with me while your smile lights my days.
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9 responses
• Philippines
26 Jan 07
Beautiful poem. Very much inspired, aren't you? But have you published your poems? Goodluck to your lovelife, anyway.
• Italy
26 Jan 07
Thank you very much:)
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@sayuri001 (130)
• Japan
25 Jan 07
i think you are in love...nice poem very romantic.
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• Italy
25 Jan 07
Yes I'm in love:) thank you.
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@sunilkonda (1215)
• India
24 Jan 07
good poem...
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• Italy
24 Jan 07
Thanks:)
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@ulerye (42)
• United States
24 Jan 07
hi, did you write this poem? its very nice u should try to get it published!ellen
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• Italy
24 Jan 07
Yes, I have written this poem:) thank you!
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@meme0907 (3481)
• United States
23 Jan 07
SF you are such a beautiful poet have you ever been published? here's +'s :)
• Italy
24 Jan 07
Thanks a lot MM, yes two my poems were published on two antologies last year. I hope to publish one my book one day. A kiss my friend:)
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@dixielol (1581)
• United States
5 Feb 07
Well, you do seem like a great poet. Im sure you could get a book published one day.
@sweetlady10 (3620)
• United States
28 Jan 07
WOW nice poem! The poem is sweet like a smile:). Don't be afraid, be happy always. Then you will be able to smile always.
• Italy
28 Jan 07
Thanks a lot:)
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@Lydia1901 (16354)
• United States
28 Jan 07
I must say, Steerforth, that is a very lovely poem and I like it very much. I think it is just beautiful.
• Italy
28 Jan 07
Thanks my friend:)
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@layney (1053)
• Italy
22 Feb 07
Well, this is really beautiful! You captured many people's feelings, or at least mine! Thank you for this artwork!
• India
5 Feb 07
wow.its simply superb.keep on writing all such poetries and we all will share ur thoughts too.keep it up and go a head my friend.