Love...My published poem!!!

@ronita34 (3923)
Canada
February 3, 2007 5:03am CST
Love Oh, the possibilities, How, endless they've become. Since the day i met you, I know my dreams have just begun. I have waited my whole life time, For what we call the "Perfect One". Fortunately it has become reality, You and i have moulded into one. Ronita34 This is the poem that i recently got published as promised!!!
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@cwilson26 (2736)
• United States
6 Feb 07
This is beautiful! You are a very gifted poet. Where were you published at? I have a few I would like to get published. I'm thinking about just submitting them to Associated Content just to get them published. I know you don't get paid for poems but I might do it anyway. Sometimes it's not about the money! :)
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
Thank you for that and i am glad that you enjoyed it! I got it published through poetry.com actually and i think i may have a referral link kicking around if you are interested. If you are in fact interested maybe send me a private message and i will send you the link there!
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@Darkwing (21588)
3 Feb 07
Well done, getting your poem published Ronita! It's a lovely poem, short but to the point. So much is contained in those few words. Thank you for sharing... I write poetry too and I really like this. Brightest Blessings.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
I am glad taht you also write poetry you should share some with us! I am sure that everyone else here would also love to read your work as much as i do!!! God Bless!!
@sweetie88 (4559)
• Pakistan
3 Feb 07
Thanks a lot for sharing such and nice about Love. I did n't know before today that there is a nice poetess hidden in mylot but glad to find that poetess now. Keep sharing ur good collection of poems with us!!!! Best of luck for u for future!!!!!! May u write such thousands of nice poems for us!!!!!
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
Awwwww...That is so sweet of you and i thank you for your encouragement! I will definately keep it up and i will be showing more of my work in the future!!
• India
3 Feb 07
Thanks for this one about Love. It is great; and the one which has touched my heart & emotions all over again. You see after a seven year long and loving relation with one of my schoolmate, I have lost her now. She is now married to some other guy and I am just trying to live without her. And we were just so close. You are Cool I say.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
AWWWWW....I am so sorry to hear that you lost your one true love! Just keep doing what you are doing and always remember that only time can heal your wounds!!!
@ilunice (947)
• Netherlands
3 Feb 07
Ya. It is a very nice one. I feel as if I ma the person for whom you composed the poem. hahaha.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
LOL...Glad that you enjoyed it!
• United States
6 Feb 07
congratulations on getting a poem published!
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
Thank you and i for one am quite proud of this accomplishment as i love to write and i wish to get a story published soon also!
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@hopeful28 (1439)
• Singapore
6 Feb 07
Wow, this is real cool. I wish I can come up with poems like that but then for me to try to get two words to rhyme is mind boggling. I wish you all the best in pursuing your gift in this area. Good luck!!
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
I am thankful that you enjoyed it! To be completely honest i used to feel exactlt the same way as you about rhyming words and one day i tried it out again and i did it! I guess it depends on what type of mood that one is in to write certain things down!
• United States
6 Feb 07
Nice poem. Congradulations on getting it published. You must be very proud of yourself. Keep up the good work.
@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
6 Feb 07
Yes, i am proud although i never expected to get this published when i wrote it. I just made it up as i came across a poetry contest so i just filled in the blanks and Vola there it is!!
@AskAlly (3627)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
And now this poem is about me and my husband. Really you should send this off to hallmark.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
How do i send them to Hallmark though is there a Hallmark site on the net maybe? I am glad that my poetry describes you and your husband so much. It shows to me that you have found want i want out of a husband. It gives me hope as it shows me that this type of love does exist therefore i have hope for a new day!
@rainbow (6763)
3 Feb 07
That's lovely, you must be so proud!
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
I am proud of my writing skills yes if that is what you mean and i am glad that you enjoyed it!
@kathy77 (7488)
• Australia
3 Feb 07
Oh this one called Love is a delightful one as well
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
I am glad that you enjoyed it!!
• United States
3 Feb 07
Very nice ronita34. Is your poetry published at poetry.com? I have some of my own poems published there but haven't written any new poems recently.
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@ronita34 (3923)
• Canada
3 Feb 07
Yes that is where i have gotten my poem published was at poetry.com and i just recently sent them another one. I have never tried to get anything done anywhere else and i wrote this poem LOVE off of the top of my head just to enter a contest that i seen while i was reading!
@weemam (13377)
21 Feb 07
Ronita that was so lovely , as You know I love poetry and I love to write it and read it , It is so lovely for someone to appreciate it too , keep writing , thanks for sharing xx
• United States
7 Feb 07
I like this. You are good. Have you published any more? Or have plans to? I hope so. Maybe you'll post them here. I really enjoyed reading this one.
@ashjoe76 (1434)
• India
7 Feb 07
That's a lovely poem! Simple yet profoundly moving. Why don't you publish more of your poems here? That would be great.