poetry

@hirals (1736)
India
October 14, 2006 3:15am CST
Falling in love is a narrow road to heaven with burning hells along the way. Post anything! Feel free to express yourself!
9 responses
@zubair439 (3183)
• India
24 Oct 06
I've seen the rain, more leak than I got pot When the sugar cane can't drink another drop When the bayou barge don't need to use the lock I've seen the rain in Louisianne, I've seen the rain I've seen the sun make gumbo in the bay Too hot to fly, so the ducks decide to stay Make my Yvonne say, no bon temp roule I've seen the sun in Louisianne, I've seen the sun I've seen the cold, won't let my big pot boil But that's OK, my hanging meat won't spoil The old crawfish, he's way down in the soil I've seen the cold in Louisianne, I've seen the cold I've seen the wind bring cypress to their knees Make my perouge land way up in the tree It's blowing hard in Camp Chu-du-chawee I've seen the wind in Louisianne, I've seen the wind
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@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
wow!! It's amazing!! I am rating u now! :) Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
@kiwidipa (2852)
• United States
2 Nov 06
divorced parents - father/son
the long ride back at the end of the weekend trying to get those last few words in before our goodbyes. Feeling the anxiety of having to let go, if for only a little while until we see each other again. the week feels like time just stops, but only a few more days til we are together. friday comes with enjoyment of knowing you are going to be here for a night or two, and then it's back to that uncomfortable Sunday drive.
@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
Nice... Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
@psmohan (1877)
• India
24 Oct 06
Learn while you earn and the more you burn now the less you are down later
@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
• India
24 Oct 06
i am not a poet..
@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
@cyberfluf (4996)
• Netherlands
24 Oct 06
Glazing thought the window stares World of glass and unawares Breaking through which means bad luck In this world where freedom's struck Well, that's just a really fast poem... hope you like it :) *blush*
@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
ya I like it ... do send more... Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
@suvojit (54)
• India
2 Nov 06
POETRY - A POEM
TWINKLE TWINKLE LITTLE STAR.................
@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
How are wonder...lolz Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
• United States
2 Nov 06
Yesterday dedication to mrs.higgs yesterday they told me you were gone. you were one of my favorite teachers. you were a mother, a wife, and wonderful teacher. Mrs.Higgs, you were a postive infulence, you always had advice, and a smile. you will be missed by family and friends. Jessica Renee Castle Copyright ©2006 Jessica Renee Castle
• India
24 Oct 06
i will respond tours..you will mine....
@hirals (1736)
• India
2 Nov 06
hehe... Thanks for reply. Greetings :)
• India
2 Nov 06
i dont belive this