Song lyrics?

United States
March 29, 2007 11:42am CST
I wrote the following just days ago, and had a fleeting thought that these words just may fit into the typical song lyric format. Any thoughts? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A light flickers on in her mind But the bulb quickly grows dim As much as she tries to fight it Her affliction takes over again Who will save her from this mess? Who will show her what to do? Who will be there through it all? Who'll stay loyal and true? She's bathed in misery Drowning in despair Thinking she's all alone That no one could ever care Who will save her from this mess? Who will show her what to do? Who will be there through it all? Who'll stay loyal and true? Baby, cry no more Know that you're not alone Realize we all have moments of despair Please, just pick up the phone, And I will save you from this mess I will show you what to do I will be there through it all I'll stay loyal and true
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