Song lyrics?
@suspendedindusk03 (319)
United States
March 29, 2007 11:42am CST
I wrote the following just days ago, and had a fleeting thought that these words just may fit into the typical song lyric format. Any thoughts?
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A light flickers on in her mind
But the bulb quickly grows dim
As much as she tries to fight it
Her affliction takes over again
Who will save her from this mess?
Who will show her what to do?
Who will be there through it all?
Who'll stay loyal and true?
She's bathed in misery
Drowning in despair
Thinking she's all alone
That no one could ever care
Who will save her from this mess?
Who will show her what to do?
Who will be there through it all?
Who'll stay loyal and true?
Baby, cry no more
Know that you're not alone
Realize we all have moments of despair
Please, just pick up the phone,
And I will save you from this mess
I will show you what to do
I will be there through it all
I'll stay loyal and true
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