I have some poetry for you..about my beloved...

@yanjiaren (9050)
April 1, 2007 7:02pm CST
I know i am so busy but got a few moments to write some poetry on my blog..for my beloved..as iam already pining.. http://chinagoldendawn.blogspot.com/
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• India
2 Apr 07
You have written a real nice poem. That's bound to get a stone melt down like anything. The poem is really sweet. Would you mind if i steal some of the lines from your poem? :)
@yanjiaren (9050)
2 Apr 07
no problem lol..
@Anniedup (3652)
• Richards Bay, South Africa
2 Apr 07
It is beautiful and very touching sniff sniff!
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@aidonia (4210)
• Greece
2 Apr 07
Ok my dear friend,what else?You sing songs ,you write poetry,you are a good Chinese teacher.....I visit your blog and I read your poetry ,is so nice how much you love your hubby.I wish both of you love each other always so much.As much far two people are if they really love each other this can't keep them away.You will be in your heart and you in his heart.
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• United States
2 Apr 07
You poetry is awazing. I would be honered if you became a part of my wedsite. You have a gift.
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• United States
2 Apr 07
Check out my profile and there is link to website, ita new project of you mine. From the looks of your writting you would by the key to perfection.
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@yanjiaren (9050)
2 Apr 07
wow i am hooured lol..i have lot's more..i am terribly soppy
• India
2 Apr 07
Pretty nice poetry Imust say you write. I also sometimes write poetries when I get quite emotional but most of the time I tend to foret about making a fair of them and leave or abandone my works of (HE)ART. I love expressing my thoughts and my feeling in terms of poems and love reading them as well. Thanks for sharing your valuable creations. Keep writing Take Care May GOD Bless YOU
@yanjiaren (9050)
2 Apr 07
thanks every one for the kind words..
• United States
2 Apr 07
Wow I'm really blow your talent you rally would be an awesome additon to me poetry group
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@bethmt (419)
• United States
2 Apr 07
I love poetry and enjoy writing it too. This is such a beautiful poem and is very emotional and powerful. I love your way with words!
• India
2 Apr 07
hey I loved the poetry...infact you know what yanji...before I actually worte it I had already started thinking about it.... and thought that it is gotta be beautful....but I got something else..... more than beautiful!!! Reallyt worth an artistic masterpiece!!! Reallyl impressed once gain....hats off
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• Philippines
2 Apr 07
Yeah, the distance is really hard, but the love you have can break down a thousand mountains.! And distance makes the heart grow fonder, they said. And you look great together ha! I'll pray that you'll be back together always! Stay happy Sis! Keep the love burning! (^^,)
@charms88 (7541)
• Philippines
2 Apr 07
"sniff" That was real touching, yanny dear. Your husband must be so proud of you. A good friend once told me that a person in love can easily write down their thoughts and feelings. I hope I will be in love too. As always, I wish you and your husband a lifetime of happiness and love. :)
• Singapore
2 Apr 07
Oh boy.. barbie I am afraid I have to give it a pass. I don't like poetry in general and literature is just not my cup of tea. Words are fine but nothing as extreme and poems and prose. Sorry barbie. :P
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