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The Photograph 3.2: A Break  email this discussion to a friend?

myLot reputation of 92/100. ORyansBelt2012 (2111) 5 years ago

Last one for awhile. I'll give y'all time to catch up and digest this

3.2

Remember what I said about measuring time in halves that occur before and after the particular epiphany in question?

Up until now, I always saw time in BMD and AMD: Before Mary Died and After Mary Died.

When the call went out over the dispatch radio, I began to measure time in what happened before I saw the photograph video and what happened after I saw the video.

I haven’t had a positive break in anything regarding Mary’s case in like… ever. In fact, this would be the first.

The call went out at 8:02 AM.

10-16, domestic disturbance.

Dispatch gave the residence, a Techwood Drive address over near Georgia Tech.

“Complainant reports that a subject identified as Darius Lamar Murphy is in violation of a restraining order. Complainant is Chantelle Jackson Murphy listed at the same address. Assistance is requested.”

“Let’s go get some bad guys,” Frank said and pulled out around traffic.

I snapped the emergency light on the front dash and Frank hit the siren.

“Kind out of our ball park isn’t it?”

“I was tired of sitting in traffic anyway,” he said. “Come on. It’s your birthday. Let’s have some fun this morning.”

Techwood Apartments sprouted like a thatch of weeds along Techwood Drive, just off the campus of Georgia Tech, during the regentrification movement in downtown Atlanta during the months leading up to the 1996 Olympics. Homes that pre-dated World War II were razed and replace by highrise apartment buildings and multi-unit houses and duplexes.

New buildings or old houses, it didn’t change what went on behind closed doors.

I always wondered about the eight-foot-high chain link fence erected around the high-rise building and the multi-unit duplexes. Was the fence put up to keep people out, or to keep the animals in?

In my opinion, it was a coin toss.

It didn’t take long to find the source of the trouble. Three black and whites were parked at angles across Techwood, effectively blocking all lanes of traffic. Darius Murphy, it had been determined, had more than a couple outstanding bench warrants hanging over his one, of which being a probation violation.

To make matters worse, Murphy was armed, and determined he wasn’t going to go down for this, and he barricaded himself inside his ex-wife’s home, along with his ex-wife and her two young children, one of whom belonged to Darius Murphy.

Oh yeah, and Murphy was armed and considered dangerous.

A tidbit not to be overlooked this cold and rainy Tuesday morning.

We flashed our shields at the uniforms manning the erected barriers along Techwood. He let us pass.

“You’re putting the cart before the horse aren’t you Hobbs? Nobody’s dead yet.”

Frank waved, “Not at all Bobby. Slow morning. Can’t think of a better way to spend than standing out here in the rain with you.”

“Glad to have you,” Bobby Curtis replied, he worked in domestics. “The more the merrier.”

“Who’s riding shotgun on this?” I asked trailing behind.

“Robinson.”

“Big Foot’s got shotgun?” Frank laughed. “And here I thought this was going to turn out to be another boring morning.”

Arnie “Big Foot” Robinson’s bedside manner in negotiations tactics fall somewhere between “If you don’t jump I’ll throw you off myself,” and “Go ahead, pull the trigger.”
He was a mountain of monolithic onyx with a bald mahogany head who never bought into the whole slavery restitution argument brokered by Southern blacks, of which Big Foot numbered.

“I’m not your gawt-damned slave,” he’d say and then smack you upside the head with a baseball bat.

“Why are you here, Hobbs?”

“Hey Arnie, just showing my partner a good time on his birthday.”

“Happy Birthday, John,” Arnie nodded my way. “Damn, they come faster and faster these days don’t they.”

“Tell me about it.”

“You know anything about this Murphy fella?” Big Foot asked.

“Never heard of him until now.” I replied.

“He stepped in deep kimshe’ is all I know. Seems he’s got a string of outstanding priors hanging over his head. He’s got a gun. He’s taken hostages. He’s violated his probation, a restraining order, and God knows what else. He’s up to his armpits in sh*t right now.”

“I’m glad I’m not him.”

“You and me both,” Big Foot said. “Our boy has suddenly found himself floating in the bottom of the sh*tter and I have my hand on the plunger.”

“How can we help?” I asked.

“Well,” Big Foot replied with a nod at the barricaded apartment door. “You can help by staying the hell out of my way.”

 

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1. myLot reputation of 94/100. halina23 (1115)   5 years ago

Sounds pretty good...you must know the cop lingo well to take this on. I'd be at a loss. Plus, i never watch any cop shows, aside from COPS:.....

You write very fast....must be nice! I'll write in spurts....like half a year at times, then 20 pages, then another 3 months, 30 pages, etc.

This chapter has me intrigued....will it help John in any way with his quest to find more information on Mary? Hmm...


myLot reputation of 92/100. ORyansBelt2012 (2111)  5 years ago

Of course.

I know cops lingo because I sit within three feet of the police scanner at the radio. I refer to the call signs for the 10-16 reference. Minimal research is it all it is.

I write for a living.

I'll be faced with a deadline inside an hour and I need 1000 words to fill. You just sit down and start hacking away at the column inches...that's all.


myLot reputation of 94/100. halina23 (1115)  5 years ago

I've yet to get to the point of writing on demand. I wish I could, because then I'd finally be able to get cracking on that article my company is paying me to write....it seems that I got that assignment ages ago, and the references are all just languishing on my desk. I think this Sunday is the day....must get at least some portion of it written, and written soon.

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2. myLot reputation of 97/100. Stiletto (3189)   ranked 368 out of 26,919 in people   5 years ago

Interesting. Don't leave it too long before you post the next bit though. I looked at your website. I like the Starbucks article - very amusing and so true.

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3. myLot reputation of 96/100. drannhh (9927)   ranked 4,446 out of 26,919 in people   5 years ago

Yeppers, no complaints here either...looks like you are catching some wind behind your sails again. Way to go!

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4. myLot reputation of 93/100. worldwise1 (6189)   ranked 761 out of 26,919 in people   5 years ago

Gritty! Gutsy! This is my kind of story, ORyans. I do hope you are going to finish it. Superb writing(as usual). I can't find a thing wrong with it-except it's not enough. I await with bated breath the next installment. You've made me areal fan.

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5. myLot reputation of 99/100. sumofalltears (2673)   ranked 1,071 out of 26,919 in people   5 years ago

I somehow missed this one in my travels, so I had to come looking for it to fill in the blanks as they say. Things are progressing very well with the story....hang in there.

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6. myLot reputation of 80/100. keda69 (2114)   5 years ago

New buildings or old houses, it didn’t change what went on behind closed doors.

GREAT! Am I up to date now since you said you were taking a break, or has your muse taken hold of you again?


myLot reputation of 92/100. ORyansBelt2012 (2111)  5 years ago

Oh yeah...I've finished a whole other chapter. ...4.0, 4.1, 4.2, 4.3, and 4.4 and also Chapter 5, 5.0.
So you're still behind. Do the other segments not show up?


myLot reputation of 80/100. keda69 (2114)  5 years ago

My mistake. This article started with you taking a break so I thought that I would be close to catching up. But I see you had no intention of slowing down. That's okay, I'll read faster. It is my mission that by tonight all my blogs and mylot and click sites be caught up. I hope it does not take me all night, BUT I WILL PERSERVERE!

Now I have to leave work so I will only read again once I get home in about an hour or so.

Await my comments... or not... :-)

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7. myLot reputation of 99/100. GardenGerty (35334)   ranked 758 out of 26,919 in people   5 years ago

I like the fresh way you express what your black characters feel about various things. Big Foot is quite a guy.

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