The Photograph 11.2: Smeared Lines  | | | | 11.2: Something’s wrong. Something’s different. When I parted the curtain of air and stepped into O’Ryan’s, something was different. The time, for one, said 10:35. Second, Frank Hobbs was gone. Long gone. His chair at the table where we’d sat was empty. I lost an hour and a half somewhere. The program had changed. The photograph had changed. Panic squeezed the pit of my gut. What's happening here? An unsettling sense of foreboding settled about my shoulders, a sudden square peg feeling. This isn't the same. This is different. The scents, the sounds, the sights of O'Ryan's were different. People were not positioned as they should have been, something I'd taken for granted in all the times I'd visited the photograph in the past. The irony of that thought was not lost on me. "Excuse me." The voice came from my right, from the bartender, Eric his name was, a college kid working his way through Georgia State. I talked to him often. “Note from the white haired gentleman,” Eric said. “He had to leave, but said you’d understand the note.” I unfolded the napkin and glanced over the words scrawled in blue ink, Bob Quillan’s chicken scratching. “The lines have smeared. Game’s over. You get one chance.” | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |
| 1. keda69 (2114)
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5 years ago
| | Okey, I finally caught up after being away to Zanzibar for the past week (posted a link for some great photos and the story of the trip if you would like to see). Anyway - Glad to be caught up although it took a lot of effort to get there. Story is still good but getting really intense. | | | | | | | ORyansBelt2012 (2111)
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5 years ago
| | Glad you're back. I thought I lost you somewhere along the way. I took much of that week off in writing this. Things got really busy at work. | | | | keda69 (2114)
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5 years ago
| | I did not comment on the other sections as I read them all in one go. BOy was that a mission going through your list of discussions and since they are not in cronological order, it took a while to get them all and to sort them all. But I did it. And for the next bit I will be sure to stay on your heals. LOL - you can call me your 1st stalker... (everyone who is famous needs one, you'll just have one to prove you are famous...) | | | | ORyansBelt2012 (2111)
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5 years ago
| | So what can I do to make this easier to follow? I tried the 10.1, 10.2 method but that seems to be just as confusing. I could date each one maybe. Would that help? | | | | | | | (Free) Applebees Coupons Get Free Applebees Coupons And Save Up To 75% Off. Go-Get-Coupons.com/Applebees | add comment | | | |
| 2. sumofalltears (2673)
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5 years ago
| | Nice twist to the story looks like it is going to get very interesting now. | | | | | | | ORyansBelt2012 (2111)
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5 years ago
| | I hope so. Now we juggle back and forth, between then and now. I hope I don't muddy things up any. I'm trying to figure out how to make this easier to follow from one segment to the other. Any suggestions? | | | | | | | Applebees 50% OFF Buy One Entree Get One Free Today at Applebees ApplebeesCouponss.net | add comment | | | |
| 3. worldwise1 (6189)
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5 years ago
| | Sorry, ORyans, I got a little bit ahead of myself with the last response. I was still wondering if Eric was the bartender. I would have known had I not overlooked the previous post. So, what's happening with the photograph? Or maybe it's the time situation? | | | | | | | ORyansBelt2012 (2111)
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5 years ago
| | Now that the lines between virtual and actual have been smeared and he is actually in the past, his actions will alter the sequence of events now. He's changing time. | | | | | | | Applebees Coupons Get up to 75% off in your area today. Claim your free coupons here. CouponsCastle.com | add comment | | | |
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