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 Before she new what she was doing she was kissing him and her hands where traveling down and unzipping his pants and releasing his manhood and simply stroking it and massaging the balls to the point where he couldn't take it and he lifted up and impaled her on his long hard shaft. Slowly and rhythmically he helped her move up and down on him while they moved to the music of the dance floor and moved in and out of the other dancing pairs or triplets on the floor. As the song reached the ending crescendo, so did they. Ann nuzzled Adrian's neck and what he didn't see was right before they both exploded Ann's had two long canines glide down and into his vain on his neck. When she struck at first he felt the bite but then his world exploded into stars.
Adrian was in utter ecstasy to the point where he didn't remember getting in the car and driving off with Ann back to the apartment and slipping into bed with her.
As the daylight shinned through the window Adrian got up and realized that the scenery wasn't the familiar scenery of his room this room was a gorgeous room with a large sleigh bed with red silk sheets and a deep red comforter. The room had large cherry furniture pieces to accent it. He also noticed at the foot of the bed was a trunk and then a little further away their was an armoir with a huge flat screen tv in it. The room was modern yet had a lot of influence of a time long ago. He also noticed that the room smelled of vanilla and cookies. Which made his stomache growl.
Adrian heard the door open and saw Ann peak in.
“You're finally up. How are you feeling this morning?”
“ Fine, just a little confused to how I ended up here?” Adrian said still a little sleepy.
( As of this moment I'm not sure where I'm going to go with this story line. But I do want to know what you think of the second part of the story.)
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1.  skinnychick (3317) | 2 years ago |  This post contains content of a mature nature. You must be Signed in or Registered to have the option to view this content.
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 bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | Thank you I was kinda stuck after that I didn't know where the characters where going but I wanted to see if I could just finish that scene and place them somewhere else. LOL!!!!! I'm glad that you liked it. I hope that I can continue and finish about a chapter by the end of this month. LOL!!! | |
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| 2. dumblnddzzy (10280) | 2 years ago |  Very good indeed. You had me rivited to the whole story line..I like the way you write, very visionary{is that the right word?} I'm not sure but i do hope you know what I mean. it's a good thing...Lori
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | thanks hun. I understand what you're saying. | |
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 Scoop_Dogg (1934) | 2 years ago |  'riveted' ms dizzy. Is that a euphemism?
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| dumblnddzzy (10280) | 2 years ago | Hmmmmm very well could be..lol..Lori | |
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| 3. gemini_rose (10135) | 2 years ago |  I think that you should let it take you to where it wants to go, you just follow along behind it, I think that you could turn it into a pretty cool story with the little twist you threw in. I was not expecting that. I think it is really good, I have been waiting for the second part for ages so thanks for that! I love it!
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | Thanks for loving it .. The twist I always knew was going to be there but I wasn't sure of how I was going to incoperate it before or after Adrian moved in. LOL!!! So we'll see where we go from there. LOL!!!! Take care and I'm glad you loved it I'm going to be trying to work on getting out some of my part two's rather quickly here. | |
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | Hey Scoop thanks for the love. Yep Ann is the vampire and Adrian is lunch I mean the love luch love interest. LOL!!! Sorry about the delay I'm hoping to work on this more over the summer. LOL!! And as soom as I get a person to read through my stuff and correct the typos that will go away. LOL!! I have a bad issue with spelling. LOL!! as you noticed. thanks for the review and take care.
Bella~ | |
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 1 year ago | Your welcome and I'll pm you when I get it done so you don't have to search for it. | |
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| 5. mummymo (11642) | 2 years ago |  Oo er missus - well that certainly got me a bit steamed up on a Friday afternoon bella! lol I like the second part a lot and especially the little twist! I reckon there should be another twist and it should have nothing to do with vampires just to pull the rug out from everyone who thinks that is what it is going to be! lol xxx
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | Well there may be another twist to the vampire process that I'm thinking of right now. LOL!! Because I'm not going to make them a traditional vampire in that sort of way. LOL!!! | |
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| mummymo (11642) | 2 years ago | Fantastic - can't wait to read the rest now! lol Honey nothing you do is traditional and that is why we love you! Hugs xxx | |
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | Thanks I try to be me when I write these and not think along the lines of what other authors have done. LOL! | |
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| 6. p1kef1sh (5710) | 2 years ago |  I see travel and moors. Perhaps the ocean. I love how this story is developing Bella and look forward to part 3. Thank you for your comments on my own by the way.
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | you're welcome my dear. I have one more story that I have posted on my blogspot hope you like it when you get to it. LOL!! Take care my dear. And again your very very good at it you should think of publishing. | |
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| p1kef1sh (5710) | 2 years ago | Thank you Bella. One of my issues with publishing is that I don't know where. Is there an adult bit at Lulu? Or Helium/AC? | |
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| bellaofchaos (3116) | 2 years ago | Sparks would be the one to better ask about publishing! I have yet to publish anything of my own except at poetry.com which was just a single poem. But I seriously think that you are talented and gifted and you should be published. take care my friend and please remember me when you hit it bigtime. k. | |
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