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myLot reputation of 96/100. meggan79 (447)   ranked 1 out of 349 in poetry3 months ago

It happened when the clock struck nine
With soft music and too much wine
There was no love it wasn't right
It only lasted through the night

The results of the night
Made me want to cry
I was filled with guilt and shame
The child was not the one to blame

Two years later I watched them take my baby away
I didn't have the strength; the baby was dying each day
I couldn't be near her without thinking of my sins
She was gone before the clock struck ten

Left alone with nowhere to go
No more dreams; not one hope
Left alone to live a life
Not being a mother nor a wife

By: Meg

 
 
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1. myLot reputation of 95/100. michelled (173)   ranked 7 out of 349 in poetry   3 months ago

Wow that was a great poem, it gave me gosse bumps, i liked it alot.


myLot reputation of 96/100. meggan79 (447)   ranked 1 out of 349 in poetry  3 months ago

Thank you for the wonderful response!


myLot reputation of 95/100. michelled (173)   ranked 7 out of 349 in poetry  3 months ago

no problem, i love poetry myself and have wrote some poetry myself.
what i love about it is you can express all those feelings inside you.


myLot reputation of 96/100. meggan79 (447)   ranked 1 out of 349 in poetry  3 months ago

I wish it was always easy to do so. For me I can pick and choose when to write a poem, if it doesn't come to me easily then I will stare a blank paper for hours.


myLot reputation of 95/100. michelled (173)   ranked 7 out of 349 in poetry  3 months ago

yeah i know what you mean i have momments like
that to.


myLot reputation of 96/100. meggan79 (447)   ranked 1 out of 349 in poetry  3 months ago

happy

 
2. myLot reputation of 93/100. foxyfire33 (5754)   ranked 93 out of 349 in poetry   3 months ago

Do you post these on AC? If not you really should, You can'tr get upfront payments for poetry but you get paid for page views and I'm sure you'd get a lot of views. What you write is really good.

 
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