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myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing 4 years ago

I really have this passion in writing. When I get bored, I write. When I feel sad, I write. When I'm happy, I write. I write about anything under the sun, anything I feel.
I love writing poems...

Here's my poem:

WHY

Why do people hurt you?
why do they lie?
Why do they say you have no right?
When they let you into their life.

Why do people love?
Why do they leave?
Why do they become sad?
When you want them to be happy with you all their life.

Why do they let you love them?
Why do they let them love you too?
Why do they leave you?
When you don't want to leave them too.

Why do people get hurt?
Why do they feel the pain?
Why do they fool you?
When they are supposed to be loving you.

Why do they make you cry?
Why do they take you for granted?
Why do they say goodbye?
When you don't have the reasons why.

Why do they continue to love?
Why do they love to love?
Why do they long to be loved?
When you're loving them too much.

Do you love writing poems like me? Have you written a poem? For whom?

 

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1. alyhnritchie (54)   4 years ago

yes i do that in the times i felt inlove i usually express my self thought the poem i made and i want to show to the person i love....or i had a crush...


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Yes, i write poems also when I'm in love even when I'm broken-hearted. The emotions brought by love really inspire people to write poems.

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2. myLot reputation of 88/100. notlistening2 (25117)   4 years ago

I have tried writing poems, I wanted to get them published, but when I see that was going to happen, I gave up on it, but I still like to write.

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3. myLot reputation of 98/100. James72 (7104)   ranked 683 out of 5,241 in writing   4 years ago

I like to write
but poems not quite
The meanings get hazy
and the rhyming drives me crazy.....

No I don't like writing poems to be honest and unless I had to back in my school days, never do. I love writing in general but most poems just don't click with me for some reason. I guess it also comes down to what you call "poetic". For example Shakespeare is poetic and I love Shakespeare!


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Poems don't need to be in rhymes all the time. You can makes poems that don't rhyme at all as long as the message is there and you're able to express what you want to say or feel. I also love Shakespeare's literary works because they are really amazing.


myLot reputation of 98/100. James72 (7104)   ranked 683 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

I do realise they don't have to rhyme and was just being silly! lol. One poem I HAVE always found wonderful is "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe. If you have never read it here is the link..... Let me know what you think!

http://www.heise.de/ix/ra...


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Thanks for the link! =)
"The Raven" is quite long but it is really a beautiful poem. I though rhyming really drives you crazy that you will not be able to like what Edgar Poe wrote. Why not try making some poems that will not rhyme at all. Maybe you'll like the outcome. =)

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4. myLot reputation of 98/100. checapricorn (10099)   ranked 1,549 out of 5,241 in writing   4 years ago

Hi angie,

I started to write when I had my crush in College! lol! He makes me write, we are not friends that time and I just express my feelings through poem, I guess I have made like 6 poems for him...lol!
I can write when I am very in love and very sad, but when I am satisfied and happy in my life, I can't put them into words..weird! lol!
Anyway, With my husband, I had 3 poems for him! now that I am busy working online, I never start to write again!
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myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Writing poems can really express one's feelings.
6 poems? I think you really like the girl to make that number of poems. It's also easy for me to write poems when in love and sad. When in love because there's a person inspiring me to write everything. When sad, I become too emotional that I just let the words of my poems say what I feel and make others feel it. Maybe the reason why you can't be able to write poems because you are overwhelmed with the happiness you are feeling that you can't explain it and just let yourself feel the moment that you are happy for some reason. Your husband must be very happy that you had 3 poems composed for him.

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5. myLot reputation of 96/100. tamarafireheart (13724)   ranked 713 out of 5,241 in writing   4 years ago

Hi angiemabute,


That is a beautiful poem but it feels as thought you have been really hurt at sometime or other and yes I love writing poems too and some my poems has been publish in a magazine an I only write poems for myself and no one its how I feel.


Tamara


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Thanks for the compliment! =)
I can say that I've been hurt badly in my past friendship and relationship.
Wow! I'd like my poems to be published in a magazine too. You really must be a good writer.

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6. myLot reputation of 90/100. dementia88 (775)   4 years ago

yes i write poems sometimes too. i used to do it more. i like writing random poems. yours was really good thatnk you for sharing it


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Thanks!
I just write when I feel sad and bored.
Feel free to share you poems to me.
I'd like to read your mind and get to know people through their poems.

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7. myLot reputation of 93/100. hornetlover (2633)   4 years ago

yes. when i was in college. i had a boyfriend that time so all of my poems are dedicated to him then i will make into a song. i can play a guitar. so i can put put a melody in every poems that i make. happy he was loving it so he also made a song for me.

i also made a poem for him when we broke up, and i made into a song then all our friends loved the lyrics and the melody so it became popular that time, and i heard they are still playing that poem that turned into a songhappy

i am no longer hanging with themhappy


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Normally, when I'm in love I also dedicates my poems to that person because he's my inspiration. You really are talented. I also composed a song many years ago but I couldn't play the guitar so I was not able to put some accompaniment. My best friend liked it also. I'd like to learn playing the guitar or piano so that I can fully compose a song.

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8. myLot reputation of 96/100. ShellyB (3093)   ranked 400 out of 5,241 in writing   4 years ago

I used to when I was younger, but not anymore.
When I did writem them they were for my eyes only.
Kinda selfish there huh?
Nice poem btw.


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Thanks! =)
Maybe because poems reflects its writer and you're afraid that others will be able to know what you feel. You can make it personal but there's nothing wrong if you share it because others might like it.


myLot reputation of 96/100. ShellyB (3093)   ranked 400 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

You are right, I do not share a lot of things that I write, If I did it will be with one person only.
I am not sure what other person might want to see my poetry tho :)

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9. myLot reputation of 76/100. hinkerbell (506)   ranked 1,235 out of 5,241 in writing   4 years ago

i love writing poetry but i only like reading by poetry . aha. urs is gud tho . but i dnt no why but i dnt like wen ppl read me there poetry either unless im in a poetry reading mood. aha. yeahh thats botu it but i love poetry tried entering them in a contest most are scams that want u to pay them 50 bucks so u can get a book that ur wonderful poem is in?


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Thanks! =)

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10. ewd024 (47)   ranked 1,090 out of 5,241 in writing   4 years ago

A teacher in high school once said that I got the "power of the pen". That was long ago when i still join and win contests. I was even "Journalist of the Year" in grade school. But just this year, I shared one of my works at emanilapoetry.com, and got some not so good critics. Somehow, it was so arrogant of me to still think Im good at what I do -- not anymore. I still write sometimes, but i cannot come with a winning piece anymore. Used to believe that "If words are my means to capture the world the same are my tools to lacerate the soul". Maybe my muse would meet me again anytime soon.. and maybe by then, ive already shrugged the melancholy off my shoulders.


myLot reputation of 93/100. angiemabute (200)   ranked 837 out of 5,241 in writing  4 years ago

Don't be affected with what others say on your work. People have different opinions in different things. Others might like it, others may not like it at all. It seems that you are really affected on it that you are feeling that way now. You just have to continue writing without considering if they will like it or not. It's a talent that you have to appreciate yourself for others to appreciate you too.

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