So Modest!

Thats the best ending i've ever read!..Man I'm glad for her!
P1ke..you are such a great writer..Are you going to publish this?
Love it! Love it! Love it!! and Lots of huggs

I think that it is published now if it's on Triond Rosie. I think that they own the copyright. Thank you though. I quite enjoyed writing it. I'll do another one next year!

I guess what i meant was will you get paid for this like in a book form?..Something we can keep bound up in our hands..and no this isn't kinky talking..lol..

I don't know. I do know that someone intends for me to write regularly and wants it all to be collated someplace. As you know, I do exactly as you "sisters" tell me, so I guess that I shall be producing more stuff in the coming months.

Well then would it be against there rules if i copied it and put the pages into a book form for myself?..This is such an inspiring story i would love to show it off and first send back to you for an autograph..please let me know if i'd be doing something wrong ok..
huggles

Fine by me. So long as you don't sell the book I think that it's OK. I'll be delighted to autograph anything - except a cheque!

I agree Rosekitty, loved the ending too and realy felt what she was feeling. Huggles. Ellie:D

Triond does not own the copyright. You maintain all copyrights. When you publish on Triond it must be original, unpublished work, but that does not prevent you from publishing it elsewhere AFTER it is published on Triond. For those who want to share the story, give them the link to p1ke's story on Triond. That will help her earn money and get more exposure.

Oops... sorry, him not her.

Don't you just love the way he can make you KNOW her in just a couple of pages?

My sisters have pushed me Dahr'lin Sis. It's kind of for you all with my love. XXXX

to all of you!

Thank You Sparks! I have been telling him that for MONTHS!

LOL bo...................he has an ARMY of people telling him that, and yet still, the 'insecurity'!*sigh*
But then, writers are the most insecure people in the world................but if
we keep after our dear fish, he'll bloom and grow and we'll be able to say "We knew him when!"

I second the motion. He's got talent. He's a great writer!

I have taken the first step up the ladder Sparky. I need to draw some breath now. Thank you. You have always supported me so much. XXXX

You're welcome P1ke. I did check it out, and left a comment and am really impressed with what you did with the story from when I first saw it. Took it in a whole new direction, which means..........you listen to 'criticism' and rather than get weepy, get writing instead, and poof!, out comes something better and more wonderful! Well done P1ke. Well done indeed!

Thank you. That's very kind of you to say such a lovely thing.

Thank you Bo. You have been a great support and motivator to me. XXXX

Thank you. I don't know that I have a quest especially. But I do have a number of people that are unfailing in their support of me. That makes me a very lucky and special man.

Thank you. I don't have much faith in my writing so I appreciate your very kind remarks.

Jen I am sending you a special "Thank you". XX

Thank you Keri. You want to know what happens to her next you mean? Or another story?

What happen to her and how does her family react after finding out that she has jump ship. The story cannot end there is it?

I don't know Kerri. I didn't really think about what might happen to her or to them.

ok p1key, maybe something to think about. Sorry to come across so pushy just excited I think.

Thank you Ellie. I am surprised and delighted that people have enjoyed it. XX