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myLot reputation of 51/100. katran (321)   ranked 1,337 out of 6,449 in writing1 year ago

I just recently got a good idea for a new story that I am writing. I don't know if it will end up being a short story, a novella, or a novel yet, but I tend to not plan very far ahead with these things unfortunately. Which is why I am in my current predicament! You see, the idea is based on the fact that two of the characters have entered into a marriage of convenience. The problem is, I am not sure what their reasons for the marriage should be.

I know I definitely do NOT want it to be for immigration purposes, which is the most common reason for marriages of convenience in this day and age. I know that there are financial reasons that people get married, but none of the ones that I have heard of seem strong enough. Do any of you have any ideas that would help me? It is much appreciated.

 
 
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1. myLot reputation of 88/100. DarthJustice (1360)   ranked 459 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

Maybe one or both of the characters could have gotten married to be able to leave home for some reason? That's the only other reason I can think of off the top of my head.


myLot reputation of 51/100. katran (321)   ranked 1,337 out of 6,449 in writing  1 year ago

Hmm, I had not thought of that one. That is a good idea! Thank you.:)


myLot reputation of 97/100. rmuxagirl (6617)   ranked 1,371 out of 6,449 in writing  1 year ago

I like that idea. a marriage to get away from home for some reason...that may be a story I would like to read

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2. myLot reputation of 96/100. snowy22315 (8140)   ranked 118 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

I think financial reasons are the most convenient but people also get married for companionship. I think either of those reasons would be good. People also get married because they have a commonality of interest. In lots of cases they are
just getting married because they have a need for some to the above things.

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3. myLot reputation of 71/100. iwrite (796)   ranked 1,666 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

I have an idea, I am not too sure if it is original. However it just flash across my head. I think I might have seen a movie of something similar, however I really cannot remember. So do not flame me if there is already a movie about it.

Single mother wants to get child to a good, reputed shool which places highly on family values. So Single parents are not suitable canidates for the school acceptance.

Single male (likely asia because of value) is being rush by family to get married due to father's ailling health. Chinese believe it brings luck.

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4. myLot reputation of 89/100. penny78 (409)   ranked 1,014 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

Is your story contemporary? If so, reasons for marriage of convenience could be coercion (male induced--I'll tell police I saw/know you killed someone, extorted money, etc.); economically induced (woman is poor and man turns out to be physically/sexually abusive, on the downlow (homos*xual), a bigamist with a tendency towards murder but she's a survivor and turns the tables); romantic spin (man secretly loves woman who doesn't care much about him. He marries what turns out to be a jealous, devious b*itch but towards the end she has a twin (thought dead or whereabouts unknow perhaps) who comes into the picture and kills her devious sister and takes her place--now story can go in a different, unexpected or more romantic direction (twin would have to be alluded to throughout story--can't just spring her upon readers all of a sudden (this could work in the reverse with the arriving twin being the devious one wrecking havoc on the unsuspecting male); I'll give you X amount of money if you'll marry me and pretend to be the (devoting wife but ends up...?)....

If it's the Georgian, Regent, Victorian and related eras...such marriages were common but a theme that would need an interesting twist to appear fresh...Perhaps throw in a bit of homos*xuality or perversion, excessive womanizing and it is her response that makes the story...does the wife become embittered and seeks his ruin? How would that ruination come about? False claims of sexual perversion, does she manipulate a person in high social circles and thereby set her husban up as the perpertrator? This can be done in contemporary terms.

Think of some of your favorite movies. What could be changed to make it more exciting? How would placing a story plot/theme into a different locale or era change the essence of it? Are contemporary plots more racy if situated in the middle ages or Roman Days?

How about beautiful, desirable woman forced to marry a member of a religious clergy who is handsome but staunchly religious and sexually and emotionally repressed. She sets about (out of boredom, no doubt) seducing him and it succeeds, only to have the deed (immediately or after a period of time) backfire om her in some way. In the 17th, 18th centuries she would be tied to a stake and burned alive (would make a rather dramatic climax).

You can get story ideas from current events or from reading about past (historical) events. Try Wikipedia.org/Google and key in certain words like spousal murder or debauchery and see what comes up! Good luck, katran!


myLot reputation of 98/100. wheel416 (668)   ranked 912 out of 6,449 in writing  1 year ago

Hi there penny,

What a wonderful response! I think I'm gonna take a lot of what you said and apply it to my own writing. lol I don't think that I can say it any better than you have already.

Katran, I know you said you haven't spend much time flushing out your characters and deciding which direction you want to go. As you've already noticed, that's when you get into trouble because you have so many different directions that you could go in and your trouble is narrowing it down.

I haven't written a lot of fiction lately (I think I need to get back to that as I really enjoy it.) But, I always have a couple of characters developed in the back of my mind, and then decide if it'll be appropriate to use them in the given setting and circumstances.

As creative types we tend not to want to limit our options, but sometimes we have to choose or we end of running around in circles and getting nowhere. lol

Good luck to you, happy Mylotting and be sure to let us know how it goes.

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5. myLot reputation of 95/100. spoiled311 (3801)   ranked 290 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

hi katran!

well there are several reasons for wanting to get married. for women, a lot of them just feel that at a certain point of their lives, they would want to settle down and and have children. it is rather biological because after a certain age, women can no longer bear children, and after a certain age, there are risks, even if they can be able to bear children. risks for them and their children.

and of course, for some women, they would want to be taken care of, and they assume that marrying will give them somebody to take care of them. while for others, well, it is just the need to love someone and to take care of someone else.

i am married. i wanted to settle down already. i was 32 when i got married.

but thankfully, i am very happy that i got married. it would have been different if i had not been. i am happy that i did.

take care and God bless you

happy weekend!:-)

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6. Anberlin (1)   1 year ago

How about two couples wherby the cultural grounded parents of the young female do not agree to the young male their daughter wishes to be married to, the parents try to keep them apart, yet the young couple are deep in love with one another and to enforce so to say their will and relationship unto the cultural grounded parents they get married leagally yet in secrete only revealing after some time to the parents what thier current position is in that relationship

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7. myLot reputation of 76/100. suspenseful (17152)   ranked 165 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

It used to be for business reasons. So maybe the young woman's father's business is going bankrupt, and so the father pressures her to marry the son of the business owner who is trying to drive out her father. She really cannot stand the son, he is an inconsiderate oaf, but she marries him, and they both hate each other, but after some thing that you can think of, they make a go of it and fall in love.
She could the daughter of a member of the Russian mafia and this rookie cop offers her a marriage of convenience because he knows some powerful people in the FBI who can protect her.
She is a bad girl, and she needs witness protection, and the FBI agent guarding her is pretending to introduce him to his family as his fiance, but then his mother wants a wedding, and before you know it, they are married. You can make this a comedy, make her sort of a floozie, and the other gangsters make mistakes. You can also make this in the 1920s or 1930s.
There are three ideas.

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8. myLot reputation of 95/100. lovesummer (661)   ranked 4,481 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

have anyone suggested sexual convenience? maybe one of the character was married and have kids, another no kid unmarried and young. both of them are financially stable they do not want more kids.? maybe one of them could be financially not good maybe the young one. hmmmm hope my suggestion help. the little young one sound like a leech then:P

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9. myLot reputation of 98/100. singlemommy (976)   ranked 1,936 out of 6,449 in writing   1 year ago

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