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myLot reputation of 98/100. scheng1 (1702)   ranked 90 out of 6,449 in writing11 months ago

Hi all, please read my "first born" funny short story. The link is at my profile page. Thank you very much.

Please let me have your comment too. My weak point is grammar. All the past, present,future and whatever tenses live in harmony in the same sentence. Fail to improve for the past 20 years, so sad!

 
 
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1. myLot reputation of 89/100. Margajoe (2134)   ranked 917 out of 6,449 in writing   11 months ago

I did not find the funny short story.
Only the one about the war.

Can you earn money on that site?

If you want you can take a look at the site on my profile too.
Just under the picture I have a link. There you will see the stories and poems that I have written.

Take care.


myLot reputation of 98/100. scheng1 (1702)   ranked 90 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

Hi Margajoe, I also post my author's profile in helium under my profile here. You have to click on my name to see it.


myLot reputation of 89/100. Margajoe (2134)   ranked 917 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

Was that the one about the Casino?
That was really good!!!
You write very well. I loved it.
I could also identify with it.
I used to love to go to the casino.
Now I hate them too, lol!

Take care, have a nice day.


myLot reputation of 98/100. scheng1 (1702)   ranked 90 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

Thanks Margajoe, very glad that you like it. Actually writing is so fun, and playing slots in the casino is also very fun. That's the exact thoughts when I go casino every time. Fortunately the ending is slightly different. I dare not bet all in the casino, and never cry in the casino oh.


myLot reputation of 89/100. Margajoe (2134)   ranked 917 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

No, never cry in the casino!!!w00t
Oh, that would be painful.

In my better days, when my finances were okay.
I would take only the money I was willing to lose.
Left the credit cards at home.

I knew if I take the cards with me, I would give out more than I would win.
I had that happen a couple of times. I learned my lesson!!!
I cannot trust myself, so I leave those at home and take some money with me.

But, then I get frustrated when I have to leave early, LOL!!!
Better frustrated than broke.

Take care, happy writing.

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2. myLot reputation of 93/100. underdogtoo (8736)   ranked 108 out of 6,449 in writing   11 months ago

I think a good piece of writing would at least have some kind of correct grammar. If one enjoys what one is doing and does not expect any rewards for it then it's perfectly alright to move in different times within the same sentence. No need to be sad about that. Cheers!!


myLot reputation of 98/100. scheng1 (1702)   ranked 90 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

Oh yes, I do enjoy writing the silly story, make me so happy.

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3. myLot reputation of 99/100. SomeCowgirl (8423)   ranked 214 out of 6,449 in writing   11 months ago

I am not quite sure which story I was looking for, I saw one with casino in it and checked back here to see if you had mentioned it being about a casino. I'd love to review the story if you could kindly point me to the right one.


myLot reputation of 99/100. SomeCowgirl (8423)   ranked 214 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

I read the one about the casino, and thought it was a very good piece. It gave insight to those who are anticipating such a nice trip, and the way they feel when they do not win the money they so hoped they would.

Your a very nice writer.


myLot reputation of 98/100. scheng1 (1702)   ranked 90 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

Dear Cowgal, guess what, I'm also a cowgal. I'm born in 1973, the year of the Ox according to the Chinese. Thanks for reading, glad that you like it. The funny thing is that folks there seem to like another article of mine. The one about Monday Blue. Maybe it strikes a chord with most folks.

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4. myLot reputation of 84/100. academic2 (5135)   ranked 683 out of 6,449 in writing   11 months ago

I Will make an effeo to check out this article and read your story. I will certainly make a comment when I get in there.


myLot reputation of 98/100. scheng1 (1702)   ranked 90 out of 6,449 in writing  11 months ago

happyThanks for the support. Appreciate your concern for my dear "babies". thumbup Hope the few "babies" can make you laugh and ponder about life. It's great to write and write. Somehow words that hard to say in public become easier to put in writing. lol

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