Opinions please  | |  I have already had this poem published but, as yet, I have had little feedback. I would appreciate anything you have to say, and I can stand constructive criticism as I am an amateur!
MIRRORS.
If mirrors could talk,
What would yours say?
The mirror is watching
Every day.
If mirrors had voices
Would they choke
With emotion
When they spoke?
If mirrors could talk
And mirrors never lie
If mirrors could talk...
My mirror would cry
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 caragh2608 (1017) | 4 months ago | I write a lot, have done since I was about 10, but never thought about publishing until my English teacher sent one of my poems for publishing (without my permission!) when I was 14. My mum was so proud that time, she called everyone in her phone book to read it to them. I am quite a private person and my poems are for myself and whoever they are about, but right now I am considering opening my archive as I need the money for my children. I don't think I could read the reviews if they all go public, but there are over 500 poems in notebooks in my loft. | |
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| | 2.  cripfemme (5640) | 4 months ago |  I like this poem, even though I don't usually write in rhyme. I like the last two lines best. It's a powerful image.
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| caragh2608 (1017) | 4 months ago | Not all my poems rhyme, I wrote this when I was 14 (8 years ago) | |
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| | 3.  Hatley (20583) | 2 months ago |  caragh hi Well my dear you do not sound so amateurish to me at all. I think your poem is beautiful, and polished, and every word
'counts. Good for you. You must keep on writing poetry and one day maybe you will have a whole book of poems published and we can say we knew Caragh when, good luck and God bless.
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