I wish you to point the problems of it!  | |  I don't know why. I want to write my feelings in English. I hardly come here beacause of my poor English, and this is my first experience here. This evening, I write down this diary. I need your kindly help to amend it and the better, tell me the reason. Thank you very much, kindly friends!
Just as you told me that I would regret to loss you. And now all the things appear that way. I just couldn't stop thinking of you in the deep night every day, and could not help to feeling lonely.
I remember quite clearly now when you told me that you would care for me forever. Your voice was so sweet that I could never forget it. But the truth is that you will only love me while I am loving you. You would not wait for me, even for one night.
I knew that since the day I said I didn't love you and you run away.
But I often toutch your face in my dream at night. And every time when I wake up, I am full of tears. What goes wrong with me? Why do I think of a man who will never love me? And the memories belong to us is poor. We never hold the hands of each other, never go to a park together, even, we never stand in front of each other.
So, what things of yours I ever had? Nothing! I wish I had a pair of wings in order to fly toutching the blue sky above and leaving you down the ground.
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| | | | | | | | 1.  Darkwing (7519) | 3 years ago |  Ok Justin, I'm up for this...
You were right. You told me I'd regret losing you and now, everything appears that way. I just couldn't stop thinking of you in the depth of every night and couldn't help feeling lonely. I remember quite clearly now when you told me that you would care for me forever. Your voices was so sweet that I could never foret it, but the truth is that you will only love me whilst I am loving you. You wouldn't wait for me; not even for one night. I knew that from the day I said I didn't love you, you would run away, but I often touch yur face in my dreams and every time I wake up, I am full of tears. What's wrong with me? Why do I think of a man who will never love me; our memories together are poor, we never hold hands, never go to the park together and never stand face to face. So what did I ever share with you... nothing! I wish I had wings, so I could soar up into the blue sky and leave you standing below, on the ground.
Some of the meanings of words you used were incorrect. The English language, that is spelling of words in different tenses, and the grammer, is very difficult to learn. You did very well, but I had to alter some of it around to make it sound right. I could only do this because I knew what you were trying to say... as I said, you did very well, but the grammar has to be correct.
Good luck with this and thank you for your brave attempts to write in English.:-)
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| Darkwing (7519) | 3 years ago | Oooops, I made a mistake myself! ha ha ha.
Your voice was so sweet (not voices) | |
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| Darkwing (7519) | 3 years ago | ... and I often touch your face (not yur)
Sorry... a couple of typos. | |
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